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Daisies

Daisies

Are quite like people

(or perhaps people are like daisies)

 

In full bloom in the light

But in the shade they hide away,

Wallowing in self pity.

 

Allowing themselves to be picked on

and trampled into a million pieces,

By letting people walk over them.

 

So pretty

Yet so humble,

Their beauty goes unnoticed, even by themselves.

 

Until one day someone treasures it

and falls hopelessly in love with the humble daisy,

Preferring it over the other daisies.

 

Then finally the daisy shrinks

to a tatty mess,

no longer young and beautiful-

Dead.

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Written by
rachelvf
Published
Jun 1, 2015
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19·94
Notes

again this has little structure and was written when I was 15!

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#love#metaphor#life#beautiful#daisies
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