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Pitter Patter Pitter Patter The pattering sensations are eminent on your skin You bring yourself together and watch as the rain accretes into a small pool in the cup of your hands. It feels nice, To have a little bit of the world to yourself. Even if it’s just for a moment The water slips through your fingers, Leaving your palms bare. In the dismal wreckage and moist debris, Only traces of what used to be remain. Swoosh Patter Swoosh The remaining droplets of water find their way into your sleeve And run hastily down your arm. One        at             a                time. The contrast between the piercing cold of the water and the metabolic heat of your body is searing. But this is what the psyche craves. The laceration will only ever be a component of your subsistence. An unavoidable prospect. When you’re down and battered. Wrecked and tormented. Left to rot. As the cascading downpours cauterize your skin, You finally discern the truth, To how can one truly experience raw vitality. Through tribulation, In its raw essence. Bang Swoosh BANG Thunder strikes against the lampposts, vaporizing the metal, withdrawing gaseous residue and singed incineration in its midst. The rain gushes violently against the anemic concrete road. There you were, standing there in the middle of it all. Soaking wet, cupping your hands, As salt emerged from the lacrimal glands in your eyelids. Trapped in a plane of existence different from those that surrounded you. Melancholic. That’s what you were. What you’ll never cease to be. Drip         Patter                    Drip At last, the precipitation begins to subside. Leaving an atmosphere of moisture and humidity in its wake. The smell of resonant petrichor engulfs the surrounding vicinity. The scent emerges pleasant. A mix of chlorine,                 dopamine,   and relief.                Candles burn for an indefinite amount of time. You think as the scent starts to reek of Oxidation               and smoke. Relief engulfs you in the form of sublimation. As you evolve into a gaseous state, Drift across the zephyr, And          into                 the stratosphere. To prepare for the next rainy day To prepare for the next, Pitter Patter Pitter Patter
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Jan 8
Jan 8, 2026 at 11:10 PM UTC
Pitter Patter
Pitter Patter Pitter Patter The pattering sensations are eminent on your skin You bring yourself together and watch as the rain accretes into a small pool in the cup of your hands. It feels nice, To have a little bit of the world to yourself. Even if it’s just for a moment The water slips through your fingers, Leaving your palms bare. In the dismal wreckage and moist debris, Only traces of what used to be remain. Swoosh Patter Swoosh The remaining droplets of water find their way into your sleeve And run hastily down your arm. One        at             a                time. The contrast between the piercing cold of the water and the metabolic heat of your body is searing. But this is what the psyche craves. The laceration will only ever be a component of your subsistence. An unavoidable prospect. When you’re down and battered. Wrecked and tormented. Left to rot. As the cascading downpours cauterize your skin, You finally discern the truth, To how can one truly experience raw vitality. Through tribulation, In its raw essence. Bang Swoosh BANG Thunder strikes against the lampposts, vaporizing the metal, withdrawing gaseous residue and singed incineration in its midst. The rain gushes violently against the anemic concrete road. There you were, standing there in the middle of it all. Soaking wet, cupping your hands, As salt emerged from the lacrimal glands in your eyelids. Trapped in a plane of existence different from those that surrounded you. Melancholic. That’s what you were. What you’ll never cease to be. Drip         Patter                    Drip At last, the precipitation begins to subside. Leaving an atmosphere of moisture and humidity in its wake. The smell of resonant petrichor engulfs the surrounding vicinity. The scent emerges pleasant. A mix of chlorine,                 dopamine,   and relief.                Candles burn for an indefinite amount of time. You think as the scent starts to reek of Oxidation               and smoke. Relief engulfs you in the form of sublimation. As you evolve into a gaseous state, Drift across the zephyr, And          into                 the stratosphere. To prepare for the next rainy day To prepare for the next, Pitter Patter Pitter Patter
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Jan 8
Jan 8, 2026 at 11:10 PM UTC
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