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The day was for England to look solid South Africa were happy to play slow It turned out that England wanted squalid Opposition gave us nowhere to go Andrew Strauss was done in by a shooter Jonny Trotted past a full one today Collingwood survived ***** past his ****** Ian Bell gave us most cause for dismay Now Kevin played nicely for a while But Colly got out to leave us in fear Prior left us too soon for a smile So for Broad and Swann the plan was clear Jimmy hit them for the SIX of the game But for glory Graeme Swann was the name
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Feb 9, 2010
Feb 9, 2010 at 11:29 PM UTC
Ode to Graeme Sonet
The day was for England to look solid South Africa were happy to play slow It turned out that England wanted squalid Opposition gave us nowhere to go Andrew Strauss was done in by a shooter Jonny Trotted past a full one today Collingwood survived ***** past his ****** Ian Bell gave us most cause for dismay Now Kevin played nicely for a while But Colly got out to leave us in fear Prior left us too soon for a smile So for Broad and Swann the plan was clear Jimmy hit them for the SIX of the game But for glory Graeme Swann was the name
................ I recieved a challenge from Sophie (or Sophia) from the Test Match Sofa Team. The question about my ability to write other forms was raised. I enjoy a challenge, so after a bit of time on Wikipedia and for the first time in my life, I learned about Sonnets. 14 lines. 10 syllables per line. And something I really didn't grasp called Iambic Pentameter. Well, I had a go, it's not great; but crap in my hat, it's HARD. Back to limericks for me. Anyhow, via this sonnet, I tried to capture the feel of Englands first innings. I hope not to write a dirge for the 2nd innings.
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Feb 9, 2010
Feb 9, 2010 at 11:29 PM UTC
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