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When I looked in my father’s eyes, with a foul smell in my mouth, I made a promise to those skies, to not to drink again till my last breath. I sang apologies to him, with no words and mind, they came from my heart and whim, the ones of their own kind. Then I thought of future and asked for an exception, to pardon this promise for wedding of all my brothers, Then he said with a queer expression, ‘I know just a few of them, rest, who are allothers?’ :P
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Jan 16, 2014
Jan 16, 2014 at 3:39 PM UTC
An Excepted Promise
When I looked in my father’s eyes, with a foul smell in my mouth, I made a promise to those skies, to not to drink again till my last breath. I sang apologies to him, with no words and mind, they came from my heart and whim, the ones of their own kind. Then I thought of future and asked for an exception, to pardon this promise for wedding of all my brothers, Then he said with a queer expression, ‘I know just a few of them, rest, who are allothers?’ :P
prateek-jain
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Jan 16, 2014
Jan 16, 2014 at 3:39 PM UTC
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