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Our "sergeant" gave a low whistle that stopped us in our tracks. He motioned two kids forward to prepare for the "attack". The "enemy" was hiding. Behind Uncle Louie's rusted Ford. We checked our "guns" and "ammo" and we trusted in the Lord. We couldn't call artillery. We couldn't drop ****** If we really killed my cousins they'd be Hell to pay from Mom. We launched a pincer movement with our guns set to pretend. Imaginary air grenades made quick work of my friends. They had little cause to argue as we shot them in the back. They swooned upon the concrete. All were "dead" from our attack. Just then our Mother's called us in for a feast of sausage bread. Amazing how the dinner bell so quickly raised the "dead". All of us are older now and some have gone to war. Some Mother's sons I played with aren't with us anymore. If only Moms could ring a bell and call us in to eat And raise those honored dead to life like back there on my street.
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Aug 31, 2012
Aug 31, 2012 at 9:27 PM UTC
Raising the "Dead"
Our "sergeant" gave a low whistle that stopped us in our tracks. He motioned two kids forward to prepare for the "attack". The "enemy" was hiding. Behind Uncle Louie's rusted Ford. We checked our "guns" and "ammo" and we trusted in the Lord. We couldn't call artillery. We couldn't drop ****** If we really killed my cousins they'd be Hell to pay from Mom. We launched a pincer movement with our guns set to pretend. Imaginary air grenades made quick work of my friends. They had little cause to argue as we shot them in the back. They swooned upon the concrete. All were "dead" from our attack. Just then our Mother's called us in for a feast of sausage bread. Amazing how the dinner bell so quickly raised the "dead". All of us are older now and some have gone to war. Some Mother's sons I played with aren't with us anymore. If only Moms could ring a bell and call us in to eat And raise those honored dead to life like back there on my street.
The field of battle is 60th Avenue, Flushing, the time is 1959
john-f-mccullagh
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63/M/American
Aug 31, 2012
Aug 31, 2012 at 9:27 PM UTC
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