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East of Mississippi far away from the hustle, old mills, dirt and muck, mirth and the muscle... Where livelihood’s still found resting in the arm, out past the cities and down on the farm, Growing up simple cause that’s where we are, trying to hard and never getting far, Toiling in the fields or out in a barn, Well that’s where we are never getting too far, …but that’s where we are. I’ll set the stage and you listen here, is this like any story that you’ve lent to an ear? I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, how life takes turns and where it seems to go, you lead with your heart and love seems to flow... It was Saturday night and I was at the county fair, Where every kid hung out, yeah ya’ll know where, Center of town and east of Mississippi’s with the young cowboys and the girls were all hippies, The winds picked up and she shined in the moon, My heart thumping so hard it made me swoon, I knew I had to make my move soon, So I walked right up and grabbed her hand and spun her around like I had a plan, We started dancing and wouldn’t you know, love was on the horizon and that’s how it goes, From the square that night and back to my car, small town lovers that’s about as far, …and I was playing it cool acting Brad Pitt to my best and asking her to dance was my best guess, Oh my baby in that sundress! …and nothing in this world will ever compare, life with her was what I needed to share, I asked her to marry me right then and there, Her eyes lit up and the crowd just stared as the clouds rolled by and the moonlight flared, She walked right up and grabbed my hand and stood me up like she had a plan, and that first kiss was ‘man-o-man’ …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there. She was so pretty she made me feel old and that’s our story of love I’ve told. I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, how life takes turns and where it seems to go, How there’s nothing in this world like her sundress and dancing in the moonlight was my best guess. County fair, a proposal and our first kiss and she walked right up to me just like this, …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there. She was so pretty she made me feel old and that’s our story of love I’ve told, I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, there’s no work in this world like love to grow, …and there she was in her sundress and dancing in the moonlight was my best guess, County fair, a proposal and our first kiss and she walked right up to me just like this, …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there, East of Mississippi and every town square where you’ll find her she’ll always be there, The winds will pick up and she’ll shine in the moon and your heart will pump so hard it’ll make you swoon, I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, how life takes turns and where it seems to go, How there’s nothing in this world like her sundress and dancing in the moonlight is a pretty good guess, County fair, a proposal and the first kiss and she’ll walk right up to you just like this, …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there, I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, there’s nothing in this world like love to grow…
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Jun 23, 2016
Jun 23, 2016 at 10:46 AM UTC
East of Mississippi
East of Mississippi far away from the hustle, old mills, dirt and muck, mirth and the muscle... Where livelihood’s still found resting in the arm, out past the cities and down on the farm, Growing up simple cause that’s where we are, trying to hard and never getting far, Toiling in the fields or out in a barn, Well that’s where we are never getting too far, …but that’s where we are. I’ll set the stage and you listen here, is this like any story that you’ve lent to an ear? I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, how life takes turns and where it seems to go, you lead with your heart and love seems to flow... It was Saturday night and I was at the county fair, Where every kid hung out, yeah ya’ll know where, Center of town and east of Mississippi’s with the young cowboys and the girls were all hippies, The winds picked up and she shined in the moon, My heart thumping so hard it made me swoon, I knew I had to make my move soon, So I walked right up and grabbed her hand and spun her around like I had a plan, We started dancing and wouldn’t you know, love was on the horizon and that’s how it goes, From the square that night and back to my car, small town lovers that’s about as far, …and I was playing it cool acting Brad Pitt to my best and asking her to dance was my best guess, Oh my baby in that sundress! …and nothing in this world will ever compare, life with her was what I needed to share, I asked her to marry me right then and there, Her eyes lit up and the crowd just stared as the clouds rolled by and the moonlight flared, She walked right up and grabbed my hand and stood me up like she had a plan, and that first kiss was ‘man-o-man’ …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there. She was so pretty she made me feel old and that’s our story of love I’ve told. I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, how life takes turns and where it seems to go, How there’s nothing in this world like her sundress and dancing in the moonlight was my best guess. County fair, a proposal and our first kiss and she walked right up to me just like this, …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there. She was so pretty she made me feel old and that’s our story of love I’ve told, I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, there’s no work in this world like love to grow, …and there she was in her sundress and dancing in the moonlight was my best guess, County fair, a proposal and our first kiss and she walked right up to me just like this, …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there, East of Mississippi and every town square where you’ll find her she’ll always be there, The winds will pick up and she’ll shine in the moon and your heart will pump so hard it’ll make you swoon, I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, how life takes turns and where it seems to go, How there’s nothing in this world like her sundress and dancing in the moonlight is a pretty good guess, County fair, a proposal and the first kiss and she’ll walk right up to you just like this, …and nothing in this world can ever compare to those green eyes and that brown hair and life together is what we’re gonna share and the love in her eyes was always there, I know it’s familiar and everyone should know, there’s nothing in this world like love to grow…
Country music mythology; girls are beautiful in nothing but a sundress, everyone marries their high school sweetheart, grows up on a farm, has a pick-up truck at age fifteen, has never been anywhere farther than the country fair, fell in love on the first date, on the first kiss and lives in rural America circa 1950... On side B he loses the girl, his dog dies, he drinks beer, wrecks the truck and sings a song about it. I could have paired this down but if you are a songwriter it should be your job to inspire the artist singing the work by giving them more than enough possible interchanges that way the artist performing and the band can judge what fits their style best. This piece easily could be three different songs and contains at least five possible hooks. If I were a singer that is how I would want it; filled with choices.
david-john-mowers
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Jun 23, 2016
Jun 23, 2016 at 10:46 AM UTC
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