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When reason, spirit, and appetite meet There-in my soul you do greet A complicated mass of intention Whose sole purpose is the want of attention A stingy, selfish thing it is But I am human Of man. And we are as selfish as a creature can get For when the balance of these forces tip Chaos of the soul Mans weakness of will The weakness of willing mind To want To hold Something for all time But a man made of mortal flesh Cannot hope to beget A love that is as immortal as the Gods A love that is beautiful for all time Goodness, and beauty are what we seek A soul without love Miserable and full of deceit Of despair Of mindful rot Flaking off in fleshing decay A loving heart is not meant to end this way It is meant to mourn over the loss of life To love a man/woman with all its might To cry To care To kiss the morning with lamentations To hold onto the feelings of sensation A loving heart, a soulful mind Is meant to imagine love for all time Meant to dream Never despair Like breathing without air But alas all I can do is dream To write of love But a wounded heart doth know That before the burn, the ache Of raw flesh Salted Prolonged in suspended agony That there was beauty There was magic In the darkness of the night there was joy Laughter in the alignment of her soul Where her love was not new But right where it should be In her arms Wrapped up Held so tightly She never thought of falling through But no longer can she claim Mindful retention She could fall apart One wrongful infliction.
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Nov 21, 2012
Nov 21, 2012 at 12:25 PM UTC
Tripartite soul: With love
When reason, spirit, and appetite meet There-in my soul you do greet A complicated mass of intention Whose sole purpose is the want of attention A stingy, selfish thing it is But I am human Of man. And we are as selfish as a creature can get For when the balance of these forces tip Chaos of the soul Mans weakness of will The weakness of willing mind To want To hold Something for all time But a man made of mortal flesh Cannot hope to beget A love that is as immortal as the Gods A love that is beautiful for all time Goodness, and beauty are what we seek A soul without love Miserable and full of deceit Of despair Of mindful rot Flaking off in fleshing decay A loving heart is not meant to end this way It is meant to mourn over the loss of life To love a man/woman with all its might To cry To care To kiss the morning with lamentations To hold onto the feelings of sensation A loving heart, a soulful mind Is meant to imagine love for all time Meant to dream Never despair Like breathing without air But alas all I can do is dream To write of love But a wounded heart doth know That before the burn, the ache Of raw flesh Salted Prolonged in suspended agony That there was beauty There was magic In the darkness of the night there was joy Laughter in the alignment of her soul Where her love was not new But right where it should be In her arms Wrapped up Held so tightly She never thought of falling through But no longer can she claim Mindful retention She could fall apart One wrongful infliction.
This poem is written with elements of Plato's tripartite soul, drawing for the most part a brief somewhat accurate depicton of some of his ideas, while keeping the ideology of what I was emoting very clear.
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25/Cis/American
Nov 21, 2012
Nov 21, 2012 at 12:25 PM UTC
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