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*In Algiers I held a glass that held a face's stare In the glass the face that stared stared back at me in fear.* We came upon slowing traffic. Inside the war-torn bus the standing passengers were gently rocked as we drove along the unfinished road. Unfinished roads: you became convinced that each rock and pothole was placed carefully in order to discomfit passengers, to remind them of their poverty or the slumming middle-class of the acre sized swimming pool that awaits. We passed the sun-glassed occupants of cars and busses and the rolled-up sleeves of lorry drivers. Tanned arms hung out of  windows; fingers tapping an unheard beat. I stooped to stare at the dancing distance of  heat waves rising from the baked highway. Asphalt arteries. People gripped passports, identity papers, rosary- beads - Letters of transit - they were not needed; the border did what most borders do- it shrugged us through. Smiles become all languages. Later I sat staring out the window of a bar. Hardly blinking. A bus stopped and people got off. A dog scratched. The sky was blue and cloudless. I lifted a cold drink. Watching. Then Jez turned to me and asked, "Is this what it's like to be drunk?" I smiled as I slid my wine towards her... words    T Carroll
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Apr 16, 2015
Apr 16, 2015 at 9:12 AM UTC
Algiers -what borders do
*In Algiers I held a glass that held a face's stare In the glass the face that stared stared back at me in fear.* We came upon slowing traffic. Inside the war-torn bus the standing passengers were gently rocked as we drove along the unfinished road. Unfinished roads: you became convinced that each rock and pothole was placed carefully in order to discomfit passengers, to remind them of their poverty or the slumming middle-class of the acre sized swimming pool that awaits. We passed the sun-glassed occupants of cars and busses and the rolled-up sleeves of lorry drivers. Tanned arms hung out of  windows; fingers tapping an unheard beat. I stooped to stare at the dancing distance of  heat waves rising from the baked highway. Asphalt arteries. People gripped passports, identity papers, rosary- beads - Letters of transit - they were not needed; the border did what most borders do- it shrugged us through. Smiles become all languages. Later I sat staring out the window of a bar. Hardly blinking. A bus stopped and people got off. A dog scratched. The sky was blue and cloudless. I lifted a cold drink. Watching. Then Jez turned to me and asked, "Is this what it's like to be drunk?" I smiled as I slid my wine towards her... words    T Carroll
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Apr 16, 2015
Apr 16, 2015 at 9:12 AM UTC
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