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Do you know what is worse Than for someone to say your music skills are bad? That your music is dead Skills can be perfected with practice But once the feeling is dead It's dead. To my ears they sound fine They sound like it's full of emotion But My ears are faulty Like how I always search for a minor key To every major song first When I compare the sounds Of mine and others I can clearly hear the contrast It's scary It's like my fingers cause decay To the piano I can play all the black keys And my music would still be flatter Than it They say music comes from inside I guess my insides reflect a dull aching flat echo The emptiness rattles through my ribcage My music is dead And so am I
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Oct 7, 2013
Oct 7, 2013 at 6:41 AM UTC
A dead melody in E flat
Do you know what is worse Than for someone to say your music skills are bad? That your music is dead Skills can be perfected with practice But once the feeling is dead It's dead. To my ears they sound fine They sound like it's full of emotion But My ears are faulty Like how I always search for a minor key To every major song first When I compare the sounds Of mine and others I can clearly hear the contrast It's scary It's like my fingers cause decay To the piano I can play all the black keys And my music would still be flatter Than it They say music comes from inside I guess my insides reflect a dull aching flat echo The emptiness rattles through my ribcage My music is dead And so am I
jonathan-reyes
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Oct 7, 2013
Oct 7, 2013 at 6:41 AM UTC
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