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Finally, I see you in me I look every day and find the same I see everywhere I look there you are okay let's talk girl to girl..... Its taken me a long time to tell you I know what has been going through my mind so many days and months ago it started the day I wanted to leave and look for a better life like so many times before... You see when I walked out that door I left my heart and my very soul I tore my life to little bitty shreds the pain i have gone through I can't comprehend.... Its been years-and years of endless blackness nights and now I am finally looking at the me in you..... I am asking can you help me girl? since you are me and I am you.. . Its been a few years since I saw my self you left me laying on that bathroom floor when I looked in the mirror I realized what was to be the last time I looked she was so beautiful to see Oh gee, oh me, that used to be me..... Debbie Brooks 2014 @copywrite.
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Oct 12, 2014
Oct 12, 2014 at 9:20 PM UTC
I May Not BE Me
Finally, I see you in me I look every day and find the same I see everywhere I look there you are okay let's talk girl to girl..... Its taken me a long time to tell you I know what has been going through my mind so many days and months ago it started the day I wanted to leave and look for a better life like so many times before... You see when I walked out that door I left my heart and my very soul I tore my life to little bitty shreds the pain i have gone through I can't comprehend.... Its been years-and years of endless blackness nights and now I am finally looking at the me in you..... I am asking can you help me girl? since you are me and I am you.. . Its been a few years since I saw my self you left me laying on that bathroom floor when I looked in the mirror I realized what was to be the last time I looked she was so beautiful to see Oh gee, oh me, that used to be me..... Debbie Brooks 2014 @copywrite.
I may not be young, I may not be pretty, I may not be slim but I am me, and I try very hard to be the best i can be....
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Oct 12, 2014
Oct 12, 2014 at 9:20 PM UTC
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