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Who asked me, in my face, are you a cause, are your tears willing prices, paid in situ… so far from being thought no place special, Ius, to say, just another probable what did she say, that creature from my coincidental complexity colliding while realizing just today, I know how if feels to be finished, as a living thing, having been, taken as granted, just right, once, just once, and finding that once, is just where the story started, generally in the good light. If you have the wherewithal to listen to Andrea Gibson, she tells us all how dying generally feels, I wager all the tears I ever shed, she will make you cause love, she will make you weep, she will let you know the worth words carry across time and space, and determination realization, right now, is when the ideas we let be seen deserve to be seen in the best light we have. Watch Come See Me In The Good Light if you have not broken down in sobs for longer than you may remember, it is good for the soul… good for the whole
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Jan 23
Jan 23, 2026 at 5:12 PM UTC
Weeping In The Good Light
Who asked me, in my face, are you a cause, are your tears willing prices, paid in situ… so far from being thought no place special, Ius, to say, just another probable what did she say, that creature from my coincidental complexity colliding while realizing just today, I know how if feels to be finished, as a living thing, having been, taken as granted, just right, once, just once, and finding that once, is just where the story started, generally in the good light. If you have the wherewithal to listen to Andrea Gibson, she tells us all how dying generally feels, I wager all the tears I ever shed, she will make you cause love, she will make you weep, she will let you know the worth words carry across time and space, and determination realization, right now, is when the ideas we let be seen deserve to be seen in the best light we have. Watch Come See Me In The Good Light if you have not broken down in sobs for longer than you may remember, it is good for the soul… good for the whole
Andrea Gibson made me weep like I have not wept since maybe never.
kenpepiton
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77/M/Pine Valley CA
Jan 23
Jan 23, 2026 at 5:12 PM UTC
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