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my mother washed the same steel plate until it lost its reflection. I watched her hands— pruned, patient, circling the same surface until the metal couldn't hold her face. the gas ran out while the soap was still foaming. soap, and the luxury of apathy, are privileges: who gets to not care, who gets to finish washing.
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Jan 9
Jan 9, 2026 at 3:06 PM UTC
The Plate
my mother washed the same steel plate until it lost its reflection. I watched her hands— pruned, patient, circling the same surface until the metal couldn't hold her face. the gas ran out while the soap was still foaming. soap, and the luxury of apathy, are privileges: who gets to not care, who gets to finish washing.
how do I quote my world, then? when my references are gas cylinders, my mother disappearing face in steel when my footnotes are the afternoon, the interruption, the thing that runs out before you are finished
VanessaRue
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16/F/Mumbai
Jan 9
Jan 9, 2026 at 3:06 PM UTC
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