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Maybe what I need is to stay awake long enough to watch the sunset again. But don't pity me, please. I'm just "lonely;" It's the teacher I can always look up to. It thickens the skin and deepens the thoughts. It reminds me why I enjoy the sound of a stranger's laugh, and presses me to admit that I miss being touched. Lonely looks a lot like a harvested cotton field, and if you inhale the air as you drive by, you'd know exactly how to describe the smell of neglect. Lonely proclaims that something empty is just as beautiful, because you can see through it; it can only tell the truth. Maybe what I need is to stay awake long enough to watch the sunset again; to learn that its lonely goodnight is the most beautiful painting the whole world gets to witness.
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Apr 16, 2018
Apr 16, 2018 at 4:08 PM UTC
(of a place) unfrequented and remote
Maybe what I need is to stay awake long enough to watch the sunset again. But don't pity me, please. I'm just "lonely;" It's the teacher I can always look up to. It thickens the skin and deepens the thoughts. It reminds me why I enjoy the sound of a stranger's laugh, and presses me to admit that I miss being touched. Lonely looks a lot like a harvested cotton field, and if you inhale the air as you drive by, you'd know exactly how to describe the smell of neglect. Lonely proclaims that something empty is just as beautiful, because you can see through it; it can only tell the truth. Maybe what I need is to stay awake long enough to watch the sunset again; to learn that its lonely goodnight is the most beautiful painting the whole world gets to witness.
© Bitsy Sanders, April 2018
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36/F/American
Apr 16, 2018
Apr 16, 2018 at 4:08 PM UTC
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