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I wait until Enid's old man has left the flats feeling a bit brave I walk up stairs to their flat and knock at the door her mother answers and she has a black eye and says what you want? I need to see Enid what for? it's Saturday I want to go with her to the flicks flicks? she says frowning yes cinema see the morning matinee she looks past me as if she's seen an angel behind me is her father around still? she asks me no I saw him go just now make sure he's not doubling back he does sometimes just to be a cuss she says so I look over the balcony look into the Square well? she murmurs no he's gone he looked in a hurry when I saw him I say Enid! her mother says in a harsh call she turns and gazes at me her eyes dull the black eye closing what's he do for a side show I say what? she says your old man what's he do for a side show apart from hitting you and Enid? ENID she bellows I look back at her as cool as a young boy can brushing my brown quiff of hair and glazing over my hazel eyes Enid creeps out and stares out from beneath her mother's arm what is it? Enid asks looking at me then up at her mother the boy wants to take you to the cinema her mother says I can pay I say Enid says can I go? her mother sighs don't tell your father you've been you know what he's like she says do I have to lie if he asks me where I've been today? her mother bites her lip slightly swollen sure you do I say lie your head off tell the schmuck anything but the truth I tell her the truth he isn't worthy of it her mother opens her mouth to speak but it remains as a mouthed O her mother looks past me again you sure he isn't coming back? she asks I look over the balcony again no he's not coming back I say ok ok she says and she says Enid can go so I wait a few minutes outside while Enid gets ready and her mother stares at me then the sky as she brushes her lip and rubs her eye closing up like a dark plum then Enid comes out dressed in a blue dress   and her hair brushed and we walk off down the stairs of the flats she's silent but excited and I look down the stairs ahead hoping her old man isn't coming back as he does sometimes to catch them out and commit more crimes.
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Apr 25, 2015
Apr 25, 2015 at 1:45 AM UTC
CINEMA DATE 1957.
I wait until Enid's old man has left the flats feeling a bit brave I walk up stairs to their flat and knock at the door her mother answers and she has a black eye and says what you want? I need to see Enid what for? it's Saturday I want to go with her to the flicks flicks? she says frowning yes cinema see the morning matinee she looks past me as if she's seen an angel behind me is her father around still? she asks me no I saw him go just now make sure he's not doubling back he does sometimes just to be a cuss she says so I look over the balcony look into the Square well? she murmurs no he's gone he looked in a hurry when I saw him I say Enid! her mother says in a harsh call she turns and gazes at me her eyes dull the black eye closing what's he do for a side show I say what? she says your old man what's he do for a side show apart from hitting you and Enid? ENID she bellows I look back at her as cool as a young boy can brushing my brown quiff of hair and glazing over my hazel eyes Enid creeps out and stares out from beneath her mother's arm what is it? Enid asks looking at me then up at her mother the boy wants to take you to the cinema her mother says I can pay I say Enid says can I go? her mother sighs don't tell your father you've been you know what he's like she says do I have to lie if he asks me where I've been today? her mother bites her lip slightly swollen sure you do I say lie your head off tell the schmuck anything but the truth I tell her the truth he isn't worthy of it her mother opens her mouth to speak but it remains as a mouthed O her mother looks past me again you sure he isn't coming back? she asks I look over the balcony again no he's not coming back I say ok ok she says and she says Enid can go so I wait a few minutes outside while Enid gets ready and her mother stares at me then the sky as she brushes her lip and rubs her eye closing up like a dark plum then Enid comes out dressed in a blue dress   and her hair brushed and we walk off down the stairs of the flats she's silent but excited and I look down the stairs ahead hoping her old man isn't coming back as he does sometimes to catch them out and commit more crimes.
A BOY AND GIRL AND A CINEMA DATE IN 1957 IN LONDON.
terry-collett
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Apr 25, 2015
Apr 25, 2015 at 1:45 AM UTC
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