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There’s God in this rain. And he’s washing out the colors. There’s a Greyness, worth noting, That steals your spirit through your eyes. There are cigarettes in the amp. I’m home. There’s a blur, surrounding the line Between the edges of him, And where they meet everything else. His arms flailing, brain on fire, Jamming to the song, With just the drums around him. She’s broken, but a non-believer. The bane of her existence being that She’s bearing existence, but she’s still  Smoking union butts She had no intention of Signing up to receive. I find myself longing for Fall’s warmer whispers. Too dried out, I’m  Sweating through all my Summer shirts. We stood stateside to ****** Saddened and somber but still Awake, tailed by cops that were Bored, and our parents. I remember He wore red a lot that year. It was all that would hide the blood stains, on his sleeves, From where he’d stitched his heart. Looking through cabinets to Find old winter hats, And auburn-stained reminders, Of past seasons  You’d loved and lost. And the drives to  Second states, for Finding friends in unfamiliar Circumstances, when the air In your face is cold enough to chill, But bitterly addicting. And divines have prepped their Snowy canvas, blowing the Corpses of the crops To the floor of their woody settings. A fresh start for all of us God-likes,  To crunch leaves under our  Brand new boots. And he’s got his records, and Some books to go with them, And a drawing from a bus ride that Took longer than he’d planned for.  And he can’t wait to show it to everyone, and Embellish the story it told him. She’s got her thumb out, somewhere. Praying for a chance to write the Bible down  On the inside of a Buick. She hasn’t loved her mother in weeks. She and I don’t talk much anymore. But I’m praying too, to the Gods I keep. And spending each Sunday Still, all-set for snow. So bask in the glow of your cell phone light. Dance to the unrepeatable beat in your head. Tread lightly where the ice is thinner, But fear not for lack of hands To pull you back up should you fall through. The Greyness shall not claim us all.
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 11:20 AM UTC
The Greyness
There’s God in this rain. And he’s washing out the colors. There’s a Greyness, worth noting, That steals your spirit through your eyes. There are cigarettes in the amp. I’m home. There’s a blur, surrounding the line Between the edges of him, And where they meet everything else. His arms flailing, brain on fire, Jamming to the song, With just the drums around him. She’s broken, but a non-believer. The bane of her existence being that She’s bearing existence, but she’s still  Smoking union butts She had no intention of Signing up to receive. I find myself longing for Fall’s warmer whispers. Too dried out, I’m  Sweating through all my Summer shirts. We stood stateside to ****** Saddened and somber but still Awake, tailed by cops that were Bored, and our parents. I remember He wore red a lot that year. It was all that would hide the blood stains, on his sleeves, From where he’d stitched his heart. Looking through cabinets to Find old winter hats, And auburn-stained reminders, Of past seasons  You’d loved and lost. And the drives to  Second states, for Finding friends in unfamiliar Circumstances, when the air In your face is cold enough to chill, But bitterly addicting. And divines have prepped their Snowy canvas, blowing the Corpses of the crops To the floor of their woody settings. A fresh start for all of us God-likes,  To crunch leaves under our  Brand new boots. And he’s got his records, and Some books to go with them, And a drawing from a bus ride that Took longer than he’d planned for.  And he can’t wait to show it to everyone, and Embellish the story it told him. She’s got her thumb out, somewhere. Praying for a chance to write the Bible down  On the inside of a Buick. She hasn’t loved her mother in weeks. She and I don’t talk much anymore. But I’m praying too, to the Gods I keep. And spending each Sunday Still, all-set for snow. So bask in the glow of your cell phone light. Dance to the unrepeatable beat in your head. Tread lightly where the ice is thinner, But fear not for lack of hands To pull you back up should you fall through. The Greyness shall not claim us all.
I re-read that and almost cried. Every stanza came from an honest place. Some of them are specific to certain people. The Greyness is the super-villain of my poems. It comes back a lot.
seanflagstaff
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 11:20 AM UTC
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