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She is the plane you are crashing. The rusting, dusty ex-service plane that you took on and rebuilt. Inch by inch she improved. You did not merely add a lick of paint, making her glow whilst her engine only rotted further. You dug deep to the root of the problem and once you were done you flew her up, up, up, and higher. She is the plane you are crashing She is spiralling down whilst onlookers frown and murmur and comment on the bullet shaped holes in the fuselage. Yet they did not look close enough and failed to see the absence of the most important component to a healthy, working plane. Further inspection of the flaming cockpit reveals the replaced buttons and stickers, now covered in safety measures of no use. If you press the wrong button this creature will explode around you and for everybody to see. They will point and they will laugh. They will point the finger of blame. Yet nobody thinks to question the absence of the most important component to a healthy, working plane. Nobody thinks to question the absence of the pilot. The pilot of the plane he was crashing.
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Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 10:10 PM UTC
9/01/15
She is the plane you are crashing. The rusting, dusty ex-service plane that you took on and rebuilt. Inch by inch she improved. You did not merely add a lick of paint, making her glow whilst her engine only rotted further. You dug deep to the root of the problem and once you were done you flew her up, up, up, and higher. She is the plane you are crashing She is spiralling down whilst onlookers frown and murmur and comment on the bullet shaped holes in the fuselage. Yet they did not look close enough and failed to see the absence of the most important component to a healthy, working plane. Further inspection of the flaming cockpit reveals the replaced buttons and stickers, now covered in safety measures of no use. If you press the wrong button this creature will explode around you and for everybody to see. They will point and they will laugh. They will point the finger of blame. Yet nobody thinks to question the absence of the most important component to a healthy, working plane. Nobody thinks to question the absence of the pilot. The pilot of the plane he was crashing.
AFTER "AT FIRST SIGHT" BY SIERRA DEMULDER. DIRECT QUOTE IN BOLD
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Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 10:10 PM UTC
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