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Lost in the tunnel of suffering and her struggles,  I saw thick darkness in the broad daylight; Life became worthless and living disdained,  For all hope was lost as I cursed my existence. I was bitten by the venom of struggle and distress, For the hope within me seemed hopeless; Agony and sorrow was my wine and feast, And I cursed the very kind air I'd breath. Amidst all this I hoped for a better hope, I yawned for words to heal my solitude heart;  And I heard these words saying do not be dismayed, These words I inhaled gave light to my darkness. As battered, shattered and scattered as I was, Still I found reason to fight life's poisonous venom;  These words I inhaled healed my heart and struggles, For within me I saw hope knocking at my door. Despite the thick darkness, I saw light smiling at me,  Words within me came alive and hope was rekindled;  These words I heard gave me reason to live again, For life became worth living as I inhaled these words.
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May 28, 2016
May 28, 2016 at 1:46 PM UTC
I Heard These Words
Lost in the tunnel of suffering and her struggles,  I saw thick darkness in the broad daylight; Life became worthless and living disdained,  For all hope was lost as I cursed my existence. I was bitten by the venom of struggle and distress, For the hope within me seemed hopeless; Agony and sorrow was my wine and feast, And I cursed the very kind air I'd breath. Amidst all this I hoped for a better hope, I yawned for words to heal my solitude heart;  And I heard these words saying do not be dismayed, These words I inhaled gave light to my darkness. As battered, shattered and scattered as I was, Still I found reason to fight life's poisonous venom;  These words I inhaled healed my heart and struggles, For within me I saw hope knocking at my door. Despite the thick darkness, I saw light smiling at me,  Words within me came alive and hope was rekindled;  These words I heard gave me reason to live again, For life became worth living as I inhaled these words.
Power of positive words. Comfort someone today with your words.
valentine-mbagu
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May 28, 2016
May 28, 2016 at 1:46 PM UTC
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