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# She stands at the Well. But she is not alone. A voice speaks— ***"You have no husband, do you? Not just one—not two—but many. And still, you are thirsty."*** She freezes. Because the voice is true. Because she is seen. But she resists. "It’s not just the men…" Her hands tighten. *"There is another ‘her’ inside me. She fights. She ***** She wants destruction and hunger and chaos. She doesn’t listen. She doesn’t stop. She is the one who makes me want to throw myself from a cliff just so I don’t have to deal with her anymore." "She’s gonna do something crazy,"* she whispers. "And I’ll be gone. Like I was never even here." The voice does not flinch. "Then let Me meet her." Silence. A storm brews behind her ribs. The "her" within her stirs— The dark one. The wounded one. She crouches behind the rocks, clutching her shame. The other "her"—the one who still believes— She wades into the water, hands lifted, reaching for salvation. One moves toward the Light. One remains in the shadows. *"You see, Lord? She does not belong to me. She belongs to the dark."* A pause. "No," The Spirit says. "She belongs to Me." The rocks begin to shake. The water ripples. Behind the trees, the dark "her" presses her back against the bark, watching the water, watching the other "her" wade in. She wants to believe. She wants to step forward. But she remembers. The love of man is dishonest. The world swallows and devours. Every time she has trusted, she has been burned. "The water will steal me," she whispers. "The light will dissolve me. I will disappear." But the Spirit does not demand. It does not chase. It does not force. It only knows. "You are afraid that surrender will erase you," the Spirit says. "But you have already been erased." The words cut deep. Because they are true. ***"You live divided. One ‘her’ in the shadows. One ‘her’ in the light. Neither whole. Neither free."*** The dark "her" clenches her fists. "You don’t understand her," she spits. "She needs me." "No," the Spirit says. "She needs  Me." The trees begin to shake. The wind rises. ***"Come, little one. I have been waiting for you."*** She takes a step forward. The trees do not stop her. The rocks do not hold her. The dark "her" and the one who waits—the one who believes— They are not enemies. They are not strangers. They are two halves of the same soul. **And Love— Love has come to bring them both home.** #
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Mar 16, 2025
Mar 16, 2025 at 11:12 PM UTC
Hiding From Love
# She stands at the Well. But she is not alone. A voice speaks— ***"You have no husband, do you? Not just one—not two—but many. And still, you are thirsty."*** She freezes. Because the voice is true. Because she is seen. But she resists. "It’s not just the men…" Her hands tighten. *"There is another ‘her’ inside me. She fights. She ***** She wants destruction and hunger and chaos. She doesn’t listen. She doesn’t stop. She is the one who makes me want to throw myself from a cliff just so I don’t have to deal with her anymore." "She’s gonna do something crazy,"* she whispers. "And I’ll be gone. Like I was never even here." The voice does not flinch. "Then let Me meet her." Silence. A storm brews behind her ribs. The "her" within her stirs— The dark one. The wounded one. She crouches behind the rocks, clutching her shame. The other "her"—the one who still believes— She wades into the water, hands lifted, reaching for salvation. One moves toward the Light. One remains in the shadows. *"You see, Lord? She does not belong to me. She belongs to the dark."* A pause. "No," The Spirit says. "She belongs to Me." The rocks begin to shake. The water ripples. Behind the trees, the dark "her" presses her back against the bark, watching the water, watching the other "her" wade in. She wants to believe. She wants to step forward. But she remembers. The love of man is dishonest. The world swallows and devours. Every time she has trusted, she has been burned. "The water will steal me," she whispers. "The light will dissolve me. I will disappear." But the Spirit does not demand. It does not chase. It does not force. It only knows. "You are afraid that surrender will erase you," the Spirit says. "But you have already been erased." The words cut deep. Because they are true. ***"You live divided. One ‘her’ in the shadows. One ‘her’ in the light. Neither whole. Neither free."*** The dark "her" clenches her fists. "You don’t understand her," she spits. "She needs me." "No," the Spirit says. "She needs  Me." The trees begin to shake. The wind rises. ***"Come, little one. I have been waiting for you."*** She takes a step forward. The trees do not stop her. The rocks do not hold her. The dark "her" and the one who waits—the one who believes— They are not enemies. They are not strangers. They are two halves of the same soul. **And Love— Love has come to bring them both home.** #
The Art of Salvation River running.. That rushing sound in these parts spell out the words, crystal-clear.. Tree-lined banks, giving way to the Dark Hills, upslope Giving way, to granite-rocked outcroppings giving way to elk-hidden quakeys Surrendering their holy-huddle's pristine stances to tall prairie-grass, waving wild raspberries and tall pines And I, myself.. am surrendering also She is watching the water, believing That as it flows, she will not lose herself in it That it will not steal, but heal That I will not rage again within my fear I am watching her, watch the water I am watching the water-- believing That as I give of myself further into the flow that I will not become diffused by humanity By the love of man and all of its dishonesty and all of its diabolical treachery Of its lack of concern, or understanding Or ability to break through its own, self-centeredness Or its need to swallow me up into the mundane. Her hands are in the air now, praising.. Worshipping the true nature of the flow, Believing.. that I will let all of this, go And as she wades in I ease, back-- Retreating up the Dark Hills, slope Clutching tightly.. To granite-rocked outcroppings, weeping. Hiding in the quakeys, among the majestic elk Begging for the tallgrass, cover among the wild raspberries. Now, fully concealed in tall pines. Her hands are stretched out, now.. as if hovering over the waters, participating While I hide from it all While I hide, from humanity; From the fallen, love of man She is wading in, Believing . As I am leaving; Believing As the cloud-hidden sky, starts raining-- playing the most incredible, of tunes.. https://youtu.be/PgRafRp-P-o?si=1A3rb7ajt_ZPlMW2 xox https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4407079/the-art-of-salvation/ "Little Spirits were born with their little freedoms intact-- In freedom.. they are only drawn out by Love" youtu.be/i-kHleNYIDc ❤️❤️ https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4736547/children-of-the-quakies/ xo
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Mar 16, 2025
Mar 16, 2025 at 11:12 PM UTC
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