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Our life paths crossed, You're so sweet and so kind. But I've something to tell you, And I want you to know. I know there's been those, Who've held your hand tightly. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. I know there's been those, To give things of beauty. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. I know there's been those, To show you the wonders, This world of ours. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. I know there's been those, To promise forever, And treat you so tender, no less than perfect. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. All of this I promise you, but only ... ... When I hold your heart. Re-written 12/31/09  (originally titled “Till I Hold Your Heart”)   © 2/20/2013
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Feb 25, 2013
Feb 25, 2013 at 8:17 PM UTC
When I Hold Your Heart
Our life paths crossed, You're so sweet and so kind. But I've something to tell you, And I want you to know. I know there's been those, Who've held your hand tightly. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. I know there's been those, To give things of beauty. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. I know there's been those, To show you the wonders, This world of ours. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. I know there's been those, To promise forever, And treat you so tender, no less than perfect. This I will promise, but for now it can wait. All of this I promise you, but only ... ... When I hold your heart. Re-written 12/31/09  (originally titled “Till I Hold Your Heart”)   © 2/20/2013
Daedran
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Feb 25, 2013
Feb 25, 2013 at 8:17 PM UTC
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