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You place a finger to my lips To signify some change; The wind outside the building shifts, The curtains rearrange. Questioning I glance at you: Your eyes take in the problem And deem that something is askew, From top until the bottom. And then they strike! the serpents Who guarded tombs of old Had sneakéd through the curtain And crept across the floor. We dash up to the rooftop But this is in the desert; Our path of flight, it must stop That we may end this hurt. You draw your saber, slowly All others they gather round Ev'ry wedding guest holding To their host's every word You tell them of the valor That awaits a man alive And that it's your desire That everyone survive. They arm themselves, bravely And descend through the floor To the storey down below me And shutter the trapdoor. The plan is simple: find one And **** the serpent dead As soon as youve slain it, Deliver here its head. The many serpents saw us And, hissing, took their aim But not a one escaped us For our leader, host, the same He led them without falter Guiding without doubt And when the last was severed We gave a triumphant shout. The feast continued, slowly Just as it was before But none thought little of the man Who secured their lives once more.
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May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 12:42 PM UTC
Feast
You place a finger to my lips To signify some change; The wind outside the building shifts, The curtains rearrange. Questioning I glance at you: Your eyes take in the problem And deem that something is askew, From top until the bottom. And then they strike! the serpents Who guarded tombs of old Had sneakéd through the curtain And crept across the floor. We dash up to the rooftop But this is in the desert; Our path of flight, it must stop That we may end this hurt. You draw your saber, slowly All others they gather round Ev'ry wedding guest holding To their host's every word You tell them of the valor That awaits a man alive And that it's your desire That everyone survive. They arm themselves, bravely And descend through the floor To the storey down below me And shutter the trapdoor. The plan is simple: find one And **** the serpent dead As soon as youve slain it, Deliver here its head. The many serpents saw us And, hissing, took their aim But not a one escaped us For our leader, host, the same He led them without falter Guiding without doubt And when the last was severed We gave a triumphant shout. The feast continued, slowly Just as it was before But none thought little of the man Who secured their lives once more.
Sometimes I write stories. Usually if they're poem form they stink. But I thought this was better than most attempts in the past. Wedding party in the Sahara gets attacked by a group of snakes, probably magical, and one man gives them the courage to fight. I have no idea where that came from. Probably too much TV ;D
ashley-somebody
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29/F/Indonesian
May 27, 2014
May 27, 2014 at 12:42 PM UTC
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