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Intellect sores, bountifully, higher then God Nefariously bottomless, I fall then Hell Eventfully, ill angels impel my ascend to Heaven Fiendish demons walk me back As I depress, I depress beyond saving As I advance, I advance beyond saving   The Devil, nor God can believe what I've become I can't escape this I am fastened in this blending line And in between the insidious two, I am willingly blind Hell and Heaven are consolidating If the ill angels in Heaven Are like the demons too Heaven is the worst of the two
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May 25, 2014
May 25, 2014 at 12:32 AM UTC
The Tale of Heaven and Hell
Intellect sores, bountifully, higher then God Nefariously bottomless, I fall then Hell Eventfully, ill angels impel my ascend to Heaven Fiendish demons walk me back As I depress, I depress beyond saving As I advance, I advance beyond saving   The Devil, nor God can believe what I've become I can't escape this I am fastened in this blending line And in between the insidious two, I am willingly blind Hell and Heaven are consolidating If the ill angels in Heaven Are like the demons too Heaven is the worst of the two
Just wrote this haven't edited it at all! Hopefully you guys can help! Please tell me what I can change and fix
tana-young
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29/F/American
May 25, 2014
May 25, 2014 at 12:32 AM UTC
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