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You are the light In the darkest places in my mind You are the breeze on the back of my shoulders You make minutes seem like the days I would spend in bed all day waiting for the sun to guide me to the clouds They told me I was beautiful... But they were just programmed to say it You. You told me. And I belived every honest word that fell from your lips. Because you taught me what it meant to love myself.
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Aug 1, 2017
Aug 1, 2017 at 10:38 PM UTC
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You are the light In the darkest places in my mind You are the breeze on the back of my shoulders You make minutes seem like the days I would spend in bed all day waiting for the sun to guide me to the clouds They told me I was beautiful... But they were just programmed to say it You. You told me. And I belived every honest word that fell from your lips. Because you taught me what it meant to love myself.
Just thoughts and ideas. I am trying to get better at the "show, don't tell" protion of creative writing. Any constructive criticism is welcome!
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Aug 1, 2017
Aug 1, 2017 at 10:38 PM UTC
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