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I met my rose in full bloom But it had to wilt too soon It was a beautiful painting, in a bright wooden frame And no two ever looked at it the same You were like a duck, sailing on a bright blue pond I never knew that you'd have to go, so far long gone Your comforting structure had turned to dust And your shining walls had begun to rust This place was built on a conjoined dream It was so much more than we'd ever seen I learned what it was like in my own mind I learned what it was like for someone to be so kind When we saw the rubble, we all held hands Looking at the ruins and thousand sands It was the one place where I could be wild The one place where I could truly be a child But even though you were destined to fail Thank you for teaching me how to live, My Vale
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Oct 5, 2024
Oct 5, 2024 at 11:26 AM UTC
A Shared Dream
I met my rose in full bloom But it had to wilt too soon It was a beautiful painting, in a bright wooden frame And no two ever looked at it the same You were like a duck, sailing on a bright blue pond I never knew that you'd have to go, so far long gone Your comforting structure had turned to dust And your shining walls had begun to rust This place was built on a conjoined dream It was so much more than we'd ever seen I learned what it was like in my own mind I learned what it was like for someone to be so kind When we saw the rubble, we all held hands Looking at the ruins and thousand sands It was the one place where I could be wild The one place where I could truly be a child But even though you were destined to fail Thank you for teaching me how to live, My Vale
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Oct 5, 2024
Oct 5, 2024 at 11:26 AM UTC
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