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a birthday poem for S. perhaps, this is the responsibility, the purposeful gentility, that poetry engenders, that thwarts the impulse to anger, guiding away, finding a way, to temper the temper, to out and joust away our basest, our first, but never our foremost nor finest, succinct instinct, yet terrible human nonetheless... perhaps, this is where we hide, neath our carnival masque, our-would-be better selves, and struggle in this, this intensity intentional, the season's change is subtly blatant, not obvious 'cept to those who have a front seat, a well worn Adirondack chair in the nook where the airy breeze offers fruits of words so easy, pluck words as easy as breathing, and the slight gradation change, in the light and temperature, and yet, the suns cares not, for it still warms my body, though lower and slower, nonetheless, when the heat invades my soul, confirming my, our, existence, burning off the fog of our contradictory confusions, and eliciting an unsolicited "thank you god" for my, our personal miracle of re~birthing and better comprehending, that other miracle we can embrace never enough loving kindness sun~mon sep 14~15 twenty twenty five
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Sep 15, 2025
Sep 15, 2025 at 8:33 AM UTC
"Tame the savageness of man and make gentle the life of this world"
a birthday poem for S. perhaps, this is the responsibility, the purposeful gentility, that poetry engenders, that thwarts the impulse to anger, guiding away, finding a way, to temper the temper, to out and joust away our basest, our first, but never our foremost nor finest, succinct instinct, yet terrible human nonetheless... perhaps, this is where we hide, neath our carnival masque, our-would-be better selves, and struggle in this, this intensity intentional, the season's change is subtly blatant, not obvious 'cept to those who have a front seat, a well worn Adirondack chair in the nook where the airy breeze offers fruits of words so easy, pluck words as easy as breathing, and the slight gradation change, in the light and temperature, and yet, the suns cares not, for it still warms my body, though lower and slower, nonetheless, when the heat invades my soul, confirming my, our, existence, burning off the fog of our contradictory confusions, and eliciting an unsolicited "thank you god" for my, our personal miracle of re~birthing and better comprehending, that other miracle we can embrace never enough loving kindness sun~mon sep 14~15 twenty twenty five
The phrase "to tame the savageness of man" is part of a larger quote, often attributed to the ancient Greek playwright Aeschylus, which reads, "Tame the savageness of man and make gentle the life of this world". This powerful sentiment was also famously quoted by Robert F. Kennedy, who attributed his translation to Edith Hamilton, and it calls for humanity to overcome its darker impulses for the sake of a more compassionate and peaceful existence
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Sep 15, 2025
Sep 15, 2025 at 8:33 AM UTC
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