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fortunate dreams, folded within security and affluence a laundry pile of capital you’ve tried and succeeded prosperity, wealth, Constitutional rights in abundance American dreams lay thriving, slithering between your fingers like sludge nice sludge though snow crystals rest upon the sludge, decorating it for the holidays barren attempts to take hold of opportunities, you didn’t really try efforts lay unmade, like the bed he shared with you penniless inferior in the corner of the kitchen last night’s events crawling across the tile towards you running over stains and chips, creating unshaped perfect squares a city on fire; flames stumbling in the breezes
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Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 9:11 PM UTC
(not really sure where I'm going with this one, thoughts?)
fortunate dreams, folded within security and affluence a laundry pile of capital you’ve tried and succeeded prosperity, wealth, Constitutional rights in abundance American dreams lay thriving, slithering between your fingers like sludge nice sludge though snow crystals rest upon the sludge, decorating it for the holidays barren attempts to take hold of opportunities, you didn’t really try efforts lay unmade, like the bed he shared with you penniless inferior in the corner of the kitchen last night’s events crawling across the tile towards you running over stains and chips, creating unshaped perfect squares a city on fire; flames stumbling in the breezes
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Oct 6, 2014
Oct 6, 2014 at 9:11 PM UTC
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