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I was heading down my hill last night, Wheels skidding on the grass, I saw a car and thought of you. Couldn't help but flash all the way back, When I was sick in head and heart, You came to visit as surprise. I found my joy in those headlights. But you haven't been back here in years, The year written on those banged-up plates. But my mind plays its tricks, I'm still lookin' for that grade six, On the license plate of every car I pass, That looks a bit like yours. And I know it's dumb; I know it's not right, Know it's not you coming to see me tonight. But oh, how I wish it was. Wish I didn't miss you quite so much. (And I don't even miss you - that much)
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Nov 18, 2025
Nov 18, 2025 at 11:31 PM UTC
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I was heading down my hill last night, Wheels skidding on the grass, I saw a car and thought of you. Couldn't help but flash all the way back, When I was sick in head and heart, You came to visit as surprise. I found my joy in those headlights. But you haven't been back here in years, The year written on those banged-up plates. But my mind plays its tricks, I'm still lookin' for that grade six, On the license plate of every car I pass, That looks a bit like yours. And I know it's dumb; I know it's not right, Know it's not you coming to see me tonight. But oh, how I wish it was. Wish I didn't miss you quite so much. (And I don't even miss you - that much)
This is actually a song I've written but I cut it down some to make it work more as a poem so I could post it here.
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15/F/Canada
Nov 18, 2025
Nov 18, 2025 at 11:31 PM UTC
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