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Like a candle that still burns, wax falling slow like tears, its trembling flame returns to the darkness it fears. Like a fire losing breath, its smoke the only song— a sigh, a cry, a death, a fear that lingers long. Like water in my hands, it glimmers, then it dies; it slips through fragile strands, a truth the night denies. Like drowning in the deep, where beauty fades away, the waves embrace, they keep what light cannot repay. Like wheels that crush a wing, blood staining stone with red— a cruel remembering of flight now cold and dead. Like swans who drift alone, their vows reduced to air, a name once carved in stone lies hollow, stripped, and bare. And so remains the girl, beneath the midnight sky; her sorrow forms a whirl, her silence learns to cry. She drowns while gazing still, at beauty life lets go— to lose what was not hers, yet love what fades below.
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Aug 16, 2025
Aug 16, 2025 at 6:06 PM UTC
Her hands could not keep him
Like a candle that still burns, wax falling slow like tears, its trembling flame returns to the darkness it fears. Like a fire losing breath, its smoke the only song— a sigh, a cry, a death, a fear that lingers long. Like water in my hands, it glimmers, then it dies; it slips through fragile strands, a truth the night denies. Like drowning in the deep, where beauty fades away, the waves embrace, they keep what light cannot repay. Like wheels that crush a wing, blood staining stone with red— a cruel remembering of flight now cold and dead. Like swans who drift alone, their vows reduced to air, a name once carved in stone lies hollow, stripped, and bare. And so remains the girl, beneath the midnight sky; her sorrow forms a whirl, her silence learns to cry. She drowns while gazing still, at beauty life lets go— to lose what was not hers, yet love what fades below.
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Aug 16, 2025
Aug 16, 2025 at 6:06 PM UTC
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