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Sgt. Jack came back from overseas and he didn’t give one. He’d sit outside his backdoor for hours popping caps, swilling cheap beer, smoking Camels with his rifle at the ready nearby, a forty-five in his belt. He’d yell at his dog constantly, expecting it to respond in a friendly manner, but the rocks he had thrown at it over time had spooked it into a submissive role. He never said much, just stared, stared with wild blood-shot eyes that darted to and fro into space. He’d nervously look at the horizon as if something was always about to happen. His favorite line was, “Lock and loaded, let’s move.” And when a car would backfire, he’d scream, “Incoming!” His wife left him for his best friend, his kids never came back around, and his dog died without him moving a muscle. The ****** thing decomposed right out in the middle of his backyard. I guess he was used to the sweet smell of death.
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Dec 11, 2013
Dec 11, 2013 at 1:58 PM UTC
The Sweet Smell of Death (Sgt. Jack)
Sgt. Jack came back from overseas and he didn’t give one. He’d sit outside his backdoor for hours popping caps, swilling cheap beer, smoking Camels with his rifle at the ready nearby, a forty-five in his belt. He’d yell at his dog constantly, expecting it to respond in a friendly manner, but the rocks he had thrown at it over time had spooked it into a submissive role. He never said much, just stared, stared with wild blood-shot eyes that darted to and fro into space. He’d nervously look at the horizon as if something was always about to happen. His favorite line was, “Lock and loaded, let’s move.” And when a car would backfire, he’d scream, “Incoming!” His wife left him for his best friend, his kids never came back around, and his dog died without him moving a muscle. The ****** thing decomposed right out in the middle of his backyard. I guess he was used to the sweet smell of death.
A character poem based on real events.
jonny-angel
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Dec 11, 2013
Dec 11, 2013 at 1:58 PM UTC
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