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Traffic noise and the scent of an approaching thunderstorm drifts in through the door, naively left open, igniting reflections of simpler days spent smoking cigars behind rusted machinery and fallen trees in Grandma's field,  and how we would take picnic lunches and bottles of *****  to the riverbank, laughing before the fire smearing silt onto our faces and bodies, keeping the sun away  as we walk across the waterfall, wading in the stagnant flows of August,  when the water was so hot it felt like the whole world was on holiday, all bonfires and suntans laying us in respite from the heartache of the winter prairie.  Whiskey and pickup-truck beds yielding sanctuary  from chores or the chaos  of family.  The same song I'm listening to now  lilting from the truck's cab so new and full to the brim with meaning, while the dashboard lights  illuminated sweetheart dreams  of the city, averted eyes  revealing the dark  of lies  hidden in the soil, and how we would leave this place, surrendering the anonymity of shooting tin cans off log fence posts, grass stains and muddy flip-flops to brick tower exhaust fumes and a cheap pack of cigarettes smoked in a dingey bar over a whiskey sour and a notebook covered in country flowers, painted fingerprints writing homesick sonnets to lovers  abandoned amongst the cornstalks and glass bottles, 40-proof promises  concocted in homemade stills  and disassembled beneath the city skyline that obscures those stars On which we pleaded  and wished for  our emancipation.
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Dec 11, 2014
Dec 11, 2014 at 11:37 PM UTC
40-proof promises
Traffic noise and the scent of an approaching thunderstorm drifts in through the door, naively left open, igniting reflections of simpler days spent smoking cigars behind rusted machinery and fallen trees in Grandma's field,  and how we would take picnic lunches and bottles of *****  to the riverbank, laughing before the fire smearing silt onto our faces and bodies, keeping the sun away  as we walk across the waterfall, wading in the stagnant flows of August,  when the water was so hot it felt like the whole world was on holiday, all bonfires and suntans laying us in respite from the heartache of the winter prairie.  Whiskey and pickup-truck beds yielding sanctuary  from chores or the chaos  of family.  The same song I'm listening to now  lilting from the truck's cab so new and full to the brim with meaning, while the dashboard lights  illuminated sweetheart dreams  of the city, averted eyes  revealing the dark  of lies  hidden in the soil, and how we would leave this place, surrendering the anonymity of shooting tin cans off log fence posts, grass stains and muddy flip-flops to brick tower exhaust fumes and a cheap pack of cigarettes smoked in a dingey bar over a whiskey sour and a notebook covered in country flowers, painted fingerprints writing homesick sonnets to lovers  abandoned amongst the cornstalks and glass bottles, 40-proof promises  concocted in homemade stills  and disassembled beneath the city skyline that obscures those stars On which we pleaded  and wished for  our emancipation.
Copyright 2006 chelsea burk
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Dec 11, 2014
Dec 11, 2014 at 11:37 PM UTC
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