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All my life it's been hard to see the sun With this giant shadow cast above It started with a brother who was always great And now a best friend, their greatness seems to hover Thought once a grew older And away from my brother It would be easy to be great Now over shadowed from another brother For the longest time my name was "Gabe's Brother" How I longed to have my own Identity I wanted to be Greg ****** Qualities so great others could see And now at work I have the same Zack is always a little better a little faster But what I don't see most times is I'm actually smarter and stronger I always try to see what I'm not I used to ignore my own qualities Looking now I see I am Greg My own greatness my own personality I may not have a six pack Or be able to get the perfect ten But I'm competent and a leader I still have the capabilities to win For once in my life I'm no longer under a shadow For once I crawl out of the shadow and into the sun I can proudly say that my name is Greg No one to compare to, the number to my name is 1.
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Jul 2, 2013
Jul 2, 2013 at 8:50 AM UTC
Living In A Shadow
All my life it's been hard to see the sun With this giant shadow cast above It started with a brother who was always great And now a best friend, their greatness seems to hover Thought once a grew older And away from my brother It would be easy to be great Now over shadowed from another brother For the longest time my name was "Gabe's Brother" How I longed to have my own Identity I wanted to be Greg ****** Qualities so great others could see And now at work I have the same Zack is always a little better a little faster But what I don't see most times is I'm actually smarter and stronger I always try to see what I'm not I used to ignore my own qualities Looking now I see I am Greg My own greatness my own personality I may not have a six pack Or be able to get the perfect ten But I'm competent and a leader I still have the capabilities to win For once in my life I'm no longer under a shadow For once I crawl out of the shadow and into the sun I can proudly say that my name is Greg No one to compare to, the number to my name is 1.
gregory-frietzsche
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Jul 2, 2013
Jul 2, 2013 at 8:50 AM UTC
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