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Shortly after the school systems began defecating on the dreams of my generation, We found different outlets Through which we could bring our loathing to a head. My generation now writes poetry and Finds solace in video games we can beat In lives we can't seem to live the right way. It's funny to me that The Legend of Zelda, When completed, Tells you that "You are great!" While your teacher berates you for being sub-par Though you tried your damnedest To please them through drafts and drafts And drafts of work Spat out at 4am because There are more important things to deal with In regular waking hours, In regular waking life. They tell us that we have failed Because we ****** up in one class, A single credit, A single number on a sheet of paper That tries to measure us When we can't even attempt to do the same. They tell us we have failed Because we do not look good on file And apparently we do not look good Walking down the street With ****** eyes and baggy sweaters, The only clean clothes we own Because the system has ****** us clean of time To do much else than Study, study, STUDY our **** lives away. This is atrocious. When a young boy feels more accomplished Beating Pokemon Than he does when he writes a stellar paper, The best he can pen Only to be told he has a lot more work to do And that the paper "Is good... But it needs work." The culture of my generation does not discriminate. It does not tell us that we have more work to do. Instead, it tells us that "we are great" and It gives us a restart screen when we **** up beyond repair. It does not tell us we have failed, Instead offers us a kind "Try again?" It is sad When the voice over of a video game Offers more kindness Than our instructors and parents Combined. School should not send us home, wanting to **** ourselves. The system should not make a pen cap, A pair of underpants, a simple metal bookmark A weapon In the hands of the human entity of depression. We will not be marked suicide risks. As long as we keep getting our restart screens and Compliments from bits, We will triumph. We will be the heroes of our generation As long as we keep getting the chance. One day, when all the suffering is over And we have escaped this war-torn soul of "The Caring Community," Maybe those words will extend from an NES and find their way Into the mouth of a boyfriend, girlfriend, Wife, husband, friend, professor... Someday, we will hear the words and we will truly believe them. "You are great!" Maybe not today... But someday. Soon.
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Dec 13, 2013
Dec 13, 2013 at 10:16 AM UTC
You are Great
Shortly after the school systems began defecating on the dreams of my generation, We found different outlets Through which we could bring our loathing to a head. My generation now writes poetry and Finds solace in video games we can beat In lives we can't seem to live the right way. It's funny to me that The Legend of Zelda, When completed, Tells you that "You are great!" While your teacher berates you for being sub-par Though you tried your damnedest To please them through drafts and drafts And drafts of work Spat out at 4am because There are more important things to deal with In regular waking hours, In regular waking life. They tell us that we have failed Because we ****** up in one class, A single credit, A single number on a sheet of paper That tries to measure us When we can't even attempt to do the same. They tell us we have failed Because we do not look good on file And apparently we do not look good Walking down the street With ****** eyes and baggy sweaters, The only clean clothes we own Because the system has ****** us clean of time To do much else than Study, study, STUDY our **** lives away. This is atrocious. When a young boy feels more accomplished Beating Pokemon Than he does when he writes a stellar paper, The best he can pen Only to be told he has a lot more work to do And that the paper "Is good... But it needs work." The culture of my generation does not discriminate. It does not tell us that we have more work to do. Instead, it tells us that "we are great" and It gives us a restart screen when we **** up beyond repair. It does not tell us we have failed, Instead offers us a kind "Try again?" It is sad When the voice over of a video game Offers more kindness Than our instructors and parents Combined. School should not send us home, wanting to **** ourselves. The system should not make a pen cap, A pair of underpants, a simple metal bookmark A weapon In the hands of the human entity of depression. We will not be marked suicide risks. As long as we keep getting our restart screens and Compliments from bits, We will triumph. We will be the heroes of our generation As long as we keep getting the chance. One day, when all the suffering is over And we have escaped this war-torn soul of "The Caring Community," Maybe those words will extend from an NES and find their way Into the mouth of a boyfriend, girlfriend, Wife, husband, friend, professor... Someday, we will hear the words and we will truly believe them. "You are great!" Maybe not today... But someday. Soon.
jodie-lindamae
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28/Cisgender Female/American
Dec 13, 2013
Dec 13, 2013 at 10:16 AM UTC
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