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Easter Saturday morn, turned out to be wet and forlorn no matter the weather we're  cosy n' warm, together Two sleeping felines intertwined twitching                                                                        tails n' noses One Nan, with knee rug, knitting bag full                                                                         of wool n'lollies One Mama baking up treats, whilst,                                                             singing bad operettas. Then there's me and my Da,                                                   creating a blanket castle A mighty fort of fabric n' cushions, chairs n' tables No other place I'd rather be this soggy, rainy day. I am a forteener.... and a forteener I will stay.
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Apr 3, 2015
Apr 3, 2015 at 9:11 PM UTC
forteener(best read in landscape)
Easter Saturday morn, turned out to be wet and forlorn no matter the weather we're  cosy n' warm, together Two sleeping felines intertwined twitching                                                                        tails n' noses One Nan, with knee rug, knitting bag full                                                                         of wool n'lollies One Mama baking up treats, whilst,                                                             singing bad operettas. Then there's me and my Da,                                                   creating a blanket castle A mighty fort of fabric n' cushions, chairs n' tables No other place I'd rather be this soggy, rainy day. I am a forteener.... and a forteener I will stay.
prompt: write a fourteener poem....I chose to make one with some wordplay involved. Please note I chose to write without iambic pentameter. (often seen in fourteeners)
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Apr 3, 2015
Apr 3, 2015 at 9:11 PM UTC
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