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I can cry. I can scream. I can feel hell fall upon me without a minute to waste. I can feel pain absorbed over the years of being condemned to this forsaken world that cares none for me. I loved, I felt... I tried to love you best I could. I ended up destroying myself. who am I to say that I care? who am I to say I LOVE? I changed my mind in a second, when I thought of you, I realized I wasn't in love. I just felt lust And On command I was done, Done caring, Done loving and needing                              YOU.
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Mar 28, 2018
Mar 28, 2018 at 2:57 PM UTC
On Command
I can cry. I can scream. I can feel hell fall upon me without a minute to waste. I can feel pain absorbed over the years of being condemned to this forsaken world that cares none for me. I loved, I felt... I tried to love you best I could. I ended up destroying myself. who am I to say that I care? who am I to say I LOVE? I changed my mind in a second, when I thought of you, I realized I wasn't in love. I just felt lust And On command I was done, Done caring, Done loving and needing                              YOU.
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21/M/Houston, Texas
Mar 28, 2018
Mar 28, 2018 at 2:57 PM UTC
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