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I dove into the black water where three moons swam, splashed down into the wet grass of a field our gang of four played ball on endless summer days that ended when we were too old for games but why were we ever too old for something that hurt no one and brought so much joy? Because joy ceased being the metric of our lives, swapped out for that nebulous idea of success I now measure in the amount of empty pints it takes to swim with long gone friends in ancient amniotic fields
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Mar 21
Mar 21, 2026 at 7:57 PM UTC
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I dove into the black water where three moons swam, splashed down into the wet grass of a field our gang of four played ball on endless summer days that ended when we were too old for games but why were we ever too old for something that hurt no one and brought so much joy? Because joy ceased being the metric of our lives, swapped out for that nebulous idea of success I now measure in the amount of empty pints it takes to swim with long gone friends in ancient amniotic fields
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51/M/West Deptford, NJ
Mar 21
Mar 21, 2026 at 7:57 PM UTC
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