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It's cold. Everything's distorted, And I can't breathe. I'm fighting, Struggling to move, Then it's freezing. My eyes sting, I gasp for breath, But everything becomes crisp and clear. The waterfall is pulling me in As I drift around the pool of blue. I'm moving closer and closer Then I'm suddenly under. It's all white and everything's moving so fast I'm being crushed And I'm so scared I'm never going to escape I can't breathe I don't know what to do Then it all stops. I'm floating again. Drifting along a cool cushion. I can see, I can breathe. Everything's okay.
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Jan 16, 2015
Jan 16, 2015 at 10:58 AM UTC
Waterfall
It's cold. Everything's distorted, And I can't breathe. I'm fighting, Struggling to move, Then it's freezing. My eyes sting, I gasp for breath, But everything becomes crisp and clear. The waterfall is pulling me in As I drift around the pool of blue. I'm moving closer and closer Then I'm suddenly under. It's all white and everything's moving so fast I'm being crushed And I'm so scared I'm never going to escape I can't breathe I don't know what to do Then it all stops. I'm floating again. Drifting along a cool cushion. I can see, I can breathe. Everything's okay.
tally-knighte
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Jan 16, 2015
Jan 16, 2015 at 10:58 AM UTC
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