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I revelled in  pleasures That you wrapped around me And something so good Should not ever end I basked in sensations From rhythmic movements That cut off my breaths I loved every second Of tender sweet lips Embarking on journeys With chill bumps along Each trail you would wind It always amazed me How feelings erupted And left me exhausted Still begging for more I thought since I had you No gold ring was needed Oh I meant to buy one To keep you all mine But time winded on And I never ventured To jewelry places As I failed to see That ring that you wanted Could be so important In my vanity So you lost your faith To my negligence Till your empty pillow And your vacant closet Attest to the blindness I had for your feelings Now I pay the price For thoughtless assumptions In solitare nights Of longing for you Copyright Louis Brown
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Jun 13, 2012
Jun 13, 2012 at 6:41 PM UTC
I Revelled in Pleasures
I revelled in  pleasures That you wrapped around me And something so good Should not ever end I basked in sensations From rhythmic movements That cut off my breaths I loved every second Of tender sweet lips Embarking on journeys With chill bumps along Each trail you would wind It always amazed me How feelings erupted And left me exhausted Still begging for more I thought since I had you No gold ring was needed Oh I meant to buy one To keep you all mine But time winded on And I never ventured To jewelry places As I failed to see That ring that you wanted Could be so important In my vanity So you lost your faith To my negligence Till your empty pillow And your vacant closet Attest to the blindness I had for your feelings Now I pay the price For thoughtless assumptions In solitare nights Of longing for you Copyright Louis Brown
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Jun 13, 2012
Jun 13, 2012 at 6:41 PM UTC
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