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You gave me a kiss in the Garden after I offered you my body. The silver weighed heavy in your hand, but heavier still in my chest. You said my name like a prayer, but left it at the altar, a sacrifice I never agreed to. We met again at a crossroads It was dark but your face was darker Shrouded by the cloak you wore Every shadow whispered your name, and every silver coin felt like a dagger pressed against the pulse of my heart. I walked among the olive trees, your shadow trailing mine like a second skin. Every step a confession, every heartbeat a Judas song. You offered nothing; I bled everything and still, your hands were empty, your eyes a mirror of the betrayal I could not escape. Every shadow I met became a thief, every word unspoken a lash upon my spine. Stealing the warmth from my chest, leaving a hollow drum of silver coins where love had once dared to beat, only the echo of my heartbeat and the taste of betrayal on my tongue. I felt the warmth of a memory before it dissolved into venom, the hollow rhythm of a heart betrayed— its drum silent to all but itself. They dragged me from the garden, but the garden clung to my bones Thorns where roses once were, and a crown I never asked to wear Why hast thou forsaken me? Among serpents, their venom dripping, I kneel, whispering psalms of forgiveness for a mercy long denied.
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Oct 17, 2025
Oct 17, 2025 at 8:17 AM UTC
Cloven
You gave me a kiss in the Garden after I offered you my body. The silver weighed heavy in your hand, but heavier still in my chest. You said my name like a prayer, but left it at the altar, a sacrifice I never agreed to. We met again at a crossroads It was dark but your face was darker Shrouded by the cloak you wore Every shadow whispered your name, and every silver coin felt like a dagger pressed against the pulse of my heart. I walked among the olive trees, your shadow trailing mine like a second skin. Every step a confession, every heartbeat a Judas song. You offered nothing; I bled everything and still, your hands were empty, your eyes a mirror of the betrayal I could not escape. Every shadow I met became a thief, every word unspoken a lash upon my spine. Stealing the warmth from my chest, leaving a hollow drum of silver coins where love had once dared to beat, only the echo of my heartbeat and the taste of betrayal on my tongue. I felt the warmth of a memory before it dissolved into venom, the hollow rhythm of a heart betrayed— its drum silent to all but itself. They dragged me from the garden, but the garden clung to my bones Thorns where roses once were, and a crown I never asked to wear Why hast thou forsaken me? Among serpents, their venom dripping, I kneel, whispering psalms of forgiveness for a mercy long denied.
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32/Cisgender Female/Michigan
Oct 17, 2025
Oct 17, 2025 at 8:17 AM UTC
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