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I once was soft, Round faced, And pleasant. Now I’m all elbows And knees. A stone statue; Made by novice hands that, In their haste to perfect, Crafted only hard sides. In my need to belong, I sought to become Nothing but angles and sharp corners. Yet, now I’m half the size, I fear I might be half the person, and my bones leave bruises to remind me I’m gone. I wish I could be soft again But each meal shows, And critical eyes seek to Chastise each part That dares to be anything but bone.
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Jan 2, 2014
Jan 2, 2014 at 7:43 PM UTC
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I once was soft, Round faced, And pleasant. Now I’m all elbows And knees. A stone statue; Made by novice hands that, In their haste to perfect, Crafted only hard sides. In my need to belong, I sought to become Nothing but angles and sharp corners. Yet, now I’m half the size, I fear I might be half the person, and my bones leave bruises to remind me I’m gone. I wish I could be soft again But each meal shows, And critical eyes seek to Chastise each part That dares to be anything but bone.
This isn't part of my challenge.
katie-day
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Jan 2, 2014
Jan 2, 2014 at 7:43 PM UTC
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