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Every ninth wave turned red, The ones in between, were dead and grey, as her day was, her past, The man with the biggest pay-check had the biggest mouth, her job he said almost went south, without her. Alone with her thoughts instead of wearing beer in sleeves, her eyes wearied from tears as she drove here, no co-workers to try to cheer her heart. heart, red, same colour  as the waves, every ninth now fading with her sobs, fading red and she knew there was going to be no moon tonight. Music played from across the bay as a crab scuttled to avoid the smallest waves, the fireworks would begin, to light fires in the distant sky, the mushrooms began to glow about her near the blanket of sand and grass. She tilted her head back and looked at the stars begin to be lit by the night and kicked her heel and struck the ground hard, there was no soft sand but a cloth bag and an object hard, tied inside. There was no scent, no stench, she hefted the bag with two hands and untied coarse twine rolled back soft fabric open to find a large golden egg easily even in low light, suddenly she looked around quickly the only noise was that, that the dark always made, but in her mind a noisy trap door to freedom fell open for her.
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Apr 23, 2015
Apr 23, 2015 at 10:17 PM UTC
Nine of Hearts and Story Cubes
Every ninth wave turned red, The ones in between, were dead and grey, as her day was, her past, The man with the biggest pay-check had the biggest mouth, her job he said almost went south, without her. Alone with her thoughts instead of wearing beer in sleeves, her eyes wearied from tears as she drove here, no co-workers to try to cheer her heart. heart, red, same colour  as the waves, every ninth now fading with her sobs, fading red and she knew there was going to be no moon tonight. Music played from across the bay as a crab scuttled to avoid the smallest waves, the fireworks would begin, to light fires in the distant sky, the mushrooms began to glow about her near the blanket of sand and grass. She tilted her head back and looked at the stars begin to be lit by the night and kicked her heel and struck the ground hard, there was no soft sand but a cloth bag and an object hard, tied inside. There was no scent, no stench, she hefted the bag with two hands and untied coarse twine rolled back soft fabric open to find a large golden egg easily even in low light, suddenly she looked around quickly the only noise was that, that the dark always made, but in her mind a noisy trap door to freedom fell open for her.
So take a playing card (mine was the 9 of hearts)and take 5 or so minutes to write a story. I added story cubes "Voyages"  then you take your story and make it poetry. My FB and Instagram will have my prompt picture at some point so will my wordpress.  DWadeE for wordpress, elverum51 for IG and well my name is my name...fascinating
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Apr 23, 2015
Apr 23, 2015 at 10:17 PM UTC
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