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Remembering our dead Mansions, or humble abodes Virtues or deeds Learned by heart Nights of gladness Morning sorrows Stories as grains of sand Forming eternal rocks Or leaves from a tree Shelters of hopes and dreams    Ocean waves drowning breath Dreams crumbling as castles Small homes becoming shrines Images we choose, or not Our great grands looking back Thinking of us as we of ours Long for memories to grow Good grows as hands reach out In time to lift, serve or destroy Things break and lose charm Those we feared and loved Or guides found with sobs Moments of shared delight Human frailties, loss and pain Keep us in want Never enough, always too much The hell of heaving Infernos of inherited pride Or careful purpose and deeds Blessing those left We follow their climb When plotting our course In darkness hides the light Doors close in mind
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Apr 8, 2017
Apr 8, 2017 at 12:46 AM UTC
Last Breath
Remembering our dead Mansions, or humble abodes Virtues or deeds Learned by heart Nights of gladness Morning sorrows Stories as grains of sand Forming eternal rocks Or leaves from a tree Shelters of hopes and dreams    Ocean waves drowning breath Dreams crumbling as castles Small homes becoming shrines Images we choose, or not Our great grands looking back Thinking of us as we of ours Long for memories to grow Good grows as hands reach out In time to lift, serve or destroy Things break and lose charm Those we feared and loved Or guides found with sobs Moments of shared delight Human frailties, loss and pain Keep us in want Never enough, always too much The hell of heaving Infernos of inherited pride Or careful purpose and deeds Blessing those left We follow their climb When plotting our course In darkness hides the light Doors close in mind
I would appreciate critiques and comments on this poem.
martacweeks
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Apr 8, 2017
Apr 8, 2017 at 12:46 AM UTC
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