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The sun, on his return, briskly moved to the western horizon, a red cloud thanked him for his shimmering parting gift, a songbird enamored, tweeted with happy abandon: "Wow! can't take my  eyes off, what a perfection, I am impressed" The sun, gently smiled, didn't pretend, he heard, those words. Darkness, infuriated chased the bird away scolding, "keep quiet, you brat, don't disturb, the sun's meditation!" Then, spreads the stillness, no bird is at sight, even winds and waves, stood with bated breath. The purple sun, inch by inch descended to the seabed.
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Jan 8, 2013
Jan 8, 2013 at 1:35 PM UTC
At the moment of sunset
The sun, on his return, briskly moved to the western horizon, a red cloud thanked him for his shimmering parting gift, a songbird enamored, tweeted with happy abandon: "Wow! can't take my  eyes off, what a perfection, I am impressed" The sun, gently smiled, didn't pretend, he heard, those words. Darkness, infuriated chased the bird away scolding, "keep quiet, you brat, don't disturb, the sun's meditation!" Then, spreads the stillness, no bird is at sight, even winds and waves, stood with bated breath. The purple sun, inch by inch descended to the seabed.
k-balachandran
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Jan 8, 2013
Jan 8, 2013 at 1:35 PM UTC
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