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On the third day of the holidays you met Janice half way up Bath Terrace at the entrance to the flats where she lived with her gran she was dressed in her red beret yellow flowered cotton dress white socks and brown sandals she smiled when she saw you and said feared you might not show I told you I’d be here you said she looked at you and said I know but some people say things but don’t show I’m not some people if I say I’ll be here I’ll be here you said glad you’re here she said Gran doesn’t like me going out alone she says there are strange men out there who take kids off and do things to them and ****** them yes you said I read about that boy they found murdered near here she looked concerned don’t worry you’re with me my mum told me where to kick them if they try anything on oh Janice said as you both walked up to the top of the terrace to Harper Road   where’re we going? she asked a bombed out butcher’s shop you replied isn’t that dangerous? she asked not if we’re careful where we tread you said isn’t that breaking and entering? she asked no we don’t break in you said we walk in the back gate it’s not locked oh she said looking concerned we won’t get into trouble will we? Gran said she’d tan my backside if I got into trouble would I get you into trouble? you asked guess not she said softly you crossed Harper Road and went round the back of the bombed out butcher’s shop and opened the gate and entered into an empty yard you shut the gate after you and she stood gaping at the back of the shop you showed her the large walk in freezer where meat had once been kept now empty smelling of **** and damp what if you got locked in? she said the lock’s busted you said oh I see she replied her eyes large and her mouth open in wonder you took her into the shop now empty apart from a large table with a marble top where meat had once been cut and chopped up it stinks she said yes tramps get in sometime and shelter for the night are they here now? she asked nervously no they go off in the day you said giving her a smile you took her up the creaking stairs to the upper landing where the sky shone through the roof where a bomb had fallen in gosh she said how weird one of the rooms had an old bed frame pushed in a corner and the roof was still there except where a few tiles had gone someone slept there once she said and now they’re probably dead you took her hand and walked her to the window and looked out on Harper Road people would have looked out of this window too you said sad isn’t it she said and you sensed her lay on your shoulder her fair haired red bereted head.
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Aug 24, 2012
Aug 24, 2012 at 5:57 AM UTC
THE BOMBED OUT BUTCHER'S SHOP.
On the third day of the holidays you met Janice half way up Bath Terrace at the entrance to the flats where she lived with her gran she was dressed in her red beret yellow flowered cotton dress white socks and brown sandals she smiled when she saw you and said feared you might not show I told you I’d be here you said she looked at you and said I know but some people say things but don’t show I’m not some people if I say I’ll be here I’ll be here you said glad you’re here she said Gran doesn’t like me going out alone she says there are strange men out there who take kids off and do things to them and ****** them yes you said I read about that boy they found murdered near here she looked concerned don’t worry you’re with me my mum told me where to kick them if they try anything on oh Janice said as you both walked up to the top of the terrace to Harper Road   where’re we going? she asked a bombed out butcher’s shop you replied isn’t that dangerous? she asked not if we’re careful where we tread you said isn’t that breaking and entering? she asked no we don’t break in you said we walk in the back gate it’s not locked oh she said looking concerned we won’t get into trouble will we? Gran said she’d tan my backside if I got into trouble would I get you into trouble? you asked guess not she said softly you crossed Harper Road and went round the back of the bombed out butcher’s shop and opened the gate and entered into an empty yard you shut the gate after you and she stood gaping at the back of the shop you showed her the large walk in freezer where meat had once been kept now empty smelling of **** and damp what if you got locked in? she said the lock’s busted you said oh I see she replied her eyes large and her mouth open in wonder you took her into the shop now empty apart from a large table with a marble top where meat had once been cut and chopped up it stinks she said yes tramps get in sometime and shelter for the night are they here now? she asked nervously no they go off in the day you said giving her a smile you took her up the creaking stairs to the upper landing where the sky shone through the roof where a bomb had fallen in gosh she said how weird one of the rooms had an old bed frame pushed in a corner and the roof was still there except where a few tiles had gone someone slept there once she said and now they’re probably dead you took her hand and walked her to the window and looked out on Harper Road people would have looked out of this window too you said sad isn’t it she said and you sensed her lay on your shoulder her fair haired red bereted head.
terry-collett
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Aug 24, 2012
Aug 24, 2012 at 5:57 AM UTC
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