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have to love that note, extant of that song I heard at a concert ten years after that note still brings me to the verge of ecstasy. That way the cymbals crashed in rhythm pure simplicity yet keeping beats in contrast to the melody. The singers sang played dancing 'round the stage in choreographed complexity, the meanings then seemed to jump at me. The whole thing a passion play on my cortex on my brain, on my sensibilities my heart my foot would not stop tapping. And there , amidst a crowd of strangers stranger feelings overcome, the meek me the afraid to feel and I danced wild feeling now, the rhythm beat understood it all for one time one second , how I felt and breathed and tapped a foot and heard everything. It was magesty and corporeal ******* all at one.
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Feb 13, 2017
Feb 13, 2017 at 8:38 PM UTC
all at one (Santana concert, Pine **** , 1975)
have to love that note, extant of that song I heard at a concert ten years after that note still brings me to the verge of ecstasy. That way the cymbals crashed in rhythm pure simplicity yet keeping beats in contrast to the melody. The singers sang played dancing 'round the stage in choreographed complexity, the meanings then seemed to jump at me. The whole thing a passion play on my cortex on my brain, on my sensibilities my heart my foot would not stop tapping. And there , amidst a crowd of strangers stranger feelings overcome, the meek me the afraid to feel and I danced wild feeling now, the rhythm beat understood it all for one time one second , how I felt and breathed and tapped a foot and heard everything. It was magesty and corporeal ******* all at one.
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Feb 13, 2017
Feb 13, 2017 at 8:38 PM UTC
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