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Lungs filled deep the sweetest smoke and gave a dizziness to the scene I felt on an island cold and remote as if just awakened from a dream calloused feet touched lightly down on rocks and stone worn smooth I heard the church create such sounds my body trembled with the truth t’was my shoes they sold at the gate leaving me slightly unnerved knowing blisters were to be my fate I complained it was more than a tourist deserved I had paid all fees without an issue even purchased a souvenir with all my crying, they only offered tissue and continued to look at me queer I hobbled off, cursing under my breathe knowing it would not go well and now as I sit, so close to death I look back at that place as hell
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Nov 5, 2015
Nov 5, 2015 at 2:36 PM UTC
a temple revisited. a reponse to "A Day Out at the Temple" by - Pradip Chattopadhyay
Lungs filled deep the sweetest smoke and gave a dizziness to the scene I felt on an island cold and remote as if just awakened from a dream calloused feet touched lightly down on rocks and stone worn smooth I heard the church create such sounds my body trembled with the truth t’was my shoes they sold at the gate leaving me slightly unnerved knowing blisters were to be my fate I complained it was more than a tourist deserved I had paid all fees without an issue even purchased a souvenir with all my crying, they only offered tissue and continued to look at me queer I hobbled off, cursing under my breathe knowing it would not go well and now as I sit, so close to death I look back at that place as hell
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Nov 5, 2015
Nov 5, 2015 at 2:36 PM UTC
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