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He loves me We stayed up talking until 6AM He loves me not You called me by her name again He loves me You made promises I thought you might keep He loves me not Your face interrupted another night's sleep He loves me You phoned and said you'd waited in the rain for me He loves me not Then told me I was cold and ignored me completely He loves me Apparently even pretty flowers can be lying little *****
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 3:50 PM UTC
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He loves me We stayed up talking until 6AM He loves me not You called me by her name again He loves me You made promises I thought you might keep He loves me not Your face interrupted another night's sleep He loves me You phoned and said you'd waited in the rain for me He loves me not Then told me I was cold and ignored me completely He loves me Apparently even pretty flowers can be lying little *****
Not very good, but I had the idea one day when picking daisies on a walk and despite not having enough skill to execute it well, I wasn't able to let the idea go. So here it is.
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Jul 15, 2013
Jul 15, 2013 at 3:50 PM UTC
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