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Sometimes the sins laugh frolic chuckle and gasp, whenever wrath sits there calm and tranquil, unending care. when Pride takes precious time, to look up and face humility, to remove the thin veil, to observe another person and care. when slender lust embraces for another, soothing the soul creating safe sanctions - free of sale. when      g r e e d      gives        to       charity,                providing,       safe          havens, when sloth feels the urge to work, forging iron bars and even making emotions and life time scars when gluttony shares his fries, and full course meal when envy faces the sins - and says ‘it’s okay that lust is more curvy, I know I’m happy’ This is all a façade of course. envy said it with morose. gluttony? He had another meal, and another meal right after that. Mirrors reveal the real corpse. sloth daydreamed the dream. greed? what else but the space he took? How can we be something else. lust has lackluster snide, snark and *** Pride? He has a deeper veil - one that escapes his avail. Sometimes the sins want to be sinful. And sometimes wrath wants to be wrathful.
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 12:57 AM UTC
Even the sinful laugh
Sometimes the sins laugh frolic chuckle and gasp, whenever wrath sits there calm and tranquil, unending care. when Pride takes precious time, to look up and face humility, to remove the thin veil, to observe another person and care. when slender lust embraces for another, soothing the soul creating safe sanctions - free of sale. when      g r e e d      gives        to       charity,                providing,       safe          havens, when sloth feels the urge to work, forging iron bars and even making emotions and life time scars when gluttony shares his fries, and full course meal when envy faces the sins - and says ‘it’s okay that lust is more curvy, I know I’m happy’ This is all a façade of course. envy said it with morose. gluttony? He had another meal, and another meal right after that. Mirrors reveal the real corpse. sloth daydreamed the dream. greed? what else but the space he took? How can we be something else. lust has lackluster snide, snark and *** Pride? He has a deeper veil - one that escapes his avail. Sometimes the sins want to be sinful. And sometimes wrath wants to be wrathful.
I tried to expose some of the lies and facades people play out during their day to day lives. I did so by contrasting the apparently changed sins to the grammatical structure. Find the clues :)
kethan
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 12:57 AM UTC
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