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when you are new, consequences seem minuscule authority is a foreign concept, maybe too close to home a repercussion to fear the day your light enters the world, rules border your actions like the lines on a freeway who’s to say that rebellion is a bad thing expression in its greatest form. acting out to show discontent. but the underlying causes are beautiful. with experience, things become so real. one mistake and you can be sent away for a lifetime. acting out is no longer to show off development at different times, yet 18 years to decide mens rea vs actus reus. shouldn’t it be the intentions that decide? authority to shut down rebellion, self expression if you will own up to the reaction of our action. its a bit distorted. in other words over the top how many rules there are. but whats the point in breaking the rules if there were no rules to be broken. we find ourselves in this given situation. the animosity for authority; yet the lust towards rebellion. if there was no authority to implement the proper etiquette to fit the social norm, would there even be a point to committing heinous acts that are considered “illegal”. living to find a meaning to match with the experiences.
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Feb 21, 2015
Feb 21, 2015 at 12:59 PM UTC
amsterdam
when you are new, consequences seem minuscule authority is a foreign concept, maybe too close to home a repercussion to fear the day your light enters the world, rules border your actions like the lines on a freeway who’s to say that rebellion is a bad thing expression in its greatest form. acting out to show discontent. but the underlying causes are beautiful. with experience, things become so real. one mistake and you can be sent away for a lifetime. acting out is no longer to show off development at different times, yet 18 years to decide mens rea vs actus reus. shouldn’t it be the intentions that decide? authority to shut down rebellion, self expression if you will own up to the reaction of our action. its a bit distorted. in other words over the top how many rules there are. but whats the point in breaking the rules if there were no rules to be broken. we find ourselves in this given situation. the animosity for authority; yet the lust towards rebellion. if there was no authority to implement the proper etiquette to fit the social norm, would there even be a point to committing heinous acts that are considered “illegal”. living to find a meaning to match with the experiences.
makenna-k
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Feb 21, 2015
Feb 21, 2015 at 12:59 PM UTC
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