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Baruch took the bus to Kennington park he wanted to see a different place away from the usual the familiar sights and people he had brought Fay along having paid her bus fare and saying they’d not be late (she worrying about her father getting home from work and finding that she'd not completed her school essay on The Ten Commandments) and also that she was with him (whom her father termed the Jew boy) and he said it was better if she never saw him which was impossible as they lived in the same block of flats and went by each other on the stairs but her mother knew and said to keep it quiet and gave Fay a 1/- for an ice cream and drink of cola they walked around the park she gazing at the flowers and butterflies and birds and he imagining Injuns about to pop out of the bushes or over the small mound (he called a hill) on their mixed coloured horses and firing arrows from their bows or shooting from rifles and as he walked he patted the 6 shooter gun in the holster hanging from the belt of his jeans ( hidden by his grey jacket) she talked of the nun at school who slammed a wooden ruler on the palms of girls who didn't know their catechism all through and the girl who had her legs slapped for wearing her school dress too short (she'd outgrown it and her parents couldn't afford another) and he talked of the cowboy film he'd seen the other day where the cowboy wore his two guns back to front so that he had to cross hands to reach them and still out drew the bad guys and which he wanted to practice until he had it just right she listened to him quietly taking in his hazel eyes the wavy hair and that bright eyed stare and he listened to her gazing at her as he did so at her fair hair held in metal hair grips her blue eyes her pale complexion that nervousness she seemed to have as if her father was going to leap out at her from a bush and the bruise on her upper arm he'd seen when she removed her cardigan having got hot in the midday sun and after walking around for a while and then sitting looking at some old guy feeding birds with broken bread they bought two ice creams and bottles of cola and she said a grace in Latin and he mumbled some Hebrew prayer and they sat licking and eating and drinking and once she kissed his cheek shyly and said they'd best get home before her father did and he saw her with him the upstairs Jew (as her father termed him) and gave her what for as soon as she went timidly through the front door.
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Oct 30, 2013
Oct 30, 2013 at 3:08 AM UTC
FAY AND THE DAY IN THE PARK.
Baruch took the bus to Kennington park he wanted to see a different place away from the usual the familiar sights and people he had brought Fay along having paid her bus fare and saying they’d not be late (she worrying about her father getting home from work and finding that she'd not completed her school essay on The Ten Commandments) and also that she was with him (whom her father termed the Jew boy) and he said it was better if she never saw him which was impossible as they lived in the same block of flats and went by each other on the stairs but her mother knew and said to keep it quiet and gave Fay a 1/- for an ice cream and drink of cola they walked around the park she gazing at the flowers and butterflies and birds and he imagining Injuns about to pop out of the bushes or over the small mound (he called a hill) on their mixed coloured horses and firing arrows from their bows or shooting from rifles and as he walked he patted the 6 shooter gun in the holster hanging from the belt of his jeans ( hidden by his grey jacket) she talked of the nun at school who slammed a wooden ruler on the palms of girls who didn't know their catechism all through and the girl who had her legs slapped for wearing her school dress too short (she'd outgrown it and her parents couldn't afford another) and he talked of the cowboy film he'd seen the other day where the cowboy wore his two guns back to front so that he had to cross hands to reach them and still out drew the bad guys and which he wanted to practice until he had it just right she listened to him quietly taking in his hazel eyes the wavy hair and that bright eyed stare and he listened to her gazing at her as he did so at her fair hair held in metal hair grips her blue eyes her pale complexion that nervousness she seemed to have as if her father was going to leap out at her from a bush and the bruise on her upper arm he'd seen when she removed her cardigan having got hot in the midday sun and after walking around for a while and then sitting looking at some old guy feeding birds with broken bread they bought two ice creams and bottles of cola and she said a grace in Latin and he mumbled some Hebrew prayer and they sat licking and eating and drinking and once she kissed his cheek shyly and said they'd best get home before her father did and he saw her with him the upstairs Jew (as her father termed him) and gave her what for as soon as she went timidly through the front door.
SET IN LONDON IN 1950S.
terry-collett
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Oct 30, 2013
Oct 30, 2013 at 3:08 AM UTC
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