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Been havin’ sports car dreams Ridin’ in a Volvo, blowin’ steam Livin’ the crème de la crème Till I wake up to the nightmare Tired of wakin’ up poor, I swear Gotta sleep, dream of somewhere Somewhere… somewhere… Man, somewhere else is where I wanna be Reachin’ for green like my fool Gatsby Every comedown, letdown, settledown leaves me empty A fog of smoke from the green I burn, who do I be? And who was it that I be? Had to have been somebody Been slowly dyin’, workin’ nine to five How long can I last? Maybe nine or five Don’t know if I got the pay needed to live Gotta get this bread if I wanna live Takin’ a stride, lost in the forest, lookin’ for somewhere to apply Then again, might just burn the forest, float on a smoky sky I’m livin’ this life, strugglin’ against the current, currently Workin’ this job, strugglin’ weekly, concurrently for currency Grindin’ my life away, gonna end up passin’ away silently Wanna burn fast and hard, a pyre burnin’ brilliantly But I’m just slow-burnin’ embers, no fuel for the fire Gotta get some more, need someone to send me a wire These burnin’ embers are goin’ out, the light’s gettin’ dimmer Drownin’ in darkness—never been a good swimmer No food in the pantry, man, I’m gettin’ ****** thinner Keep competin’ for the prize, but never been a winner Can’t win the rigged matches unless I become a sinner Gotta be criminal just to get myself some dinner Still believe I can make it—call me the deluded dreamer Gotta try and make it, live my fantasy Or die locked in a penitentiary For the crime of chasin’ my rhapsody Probably just end up another casualty
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Mar 23, 2025
Mar 23, 2025 at 11:30 PM UTC
Burning Dream
Been havin’ sports car dreams Ridin’ in a Volvo, blowin’ steam Livin’ the crème de la crème Till I wake up to the nightmare Tired of wakin’ up poor, I swear Gotta sleep, dream of somewhere Somewhere… somewhere… Man, somewhere else is where I wanna be Reachin’ for green like my fool Gatsby Every comedown, letdown, settledown leaves me empty A fog of smoke from the green I burn, who do I be? And who was it that I be? Had to have been somebody Been slowly dyin’, workin’ nine to five How long can I last? Maybe nine or five Don’t know if I got the pay needed to live Gotta get this bread if I wanna live Takin’ a stride, lost in the forest, lookin’ for somewhere to apply Then again, might just burn the forest, float on a smoky sky I’m livin’ this life, strugglin’ against the current, currently Workin’ this job, strugglin’ weekly, concurrently for currency Grindin’ my life away, gonna end up passin’ away silently Wanna burn fast and hard, a pyre burnin’ brilliantly But I’m just slow-burnin’ embers, no fuel for the fire Gotta get some more, need someone to send me a wire These burnin’ embers are goin’ out, the light’s gettin’ dimmer Drownin’ in darkness—never been a good swimmer No food in the pantry, man, I’m gettin’ ****** thinner Keep competin’ for the prize, but never been a winner Can’t win the rigged matches unless I become a sinner Gotta be criminal just to get myself some dinner Still believe I can make it—call me the deluded dreamer Gotta try and make it, live my fantasy Or die locked in a penitentiary For the crime of chasin’ my rhapsody Probably just end up another casualty
Made this old poem of mine flow better
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27/M/Anchorage, Alaska
Mar 23, 2025
Mar 23, 2025 at 11:30 PM UTC
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