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Word challenge using the words Rattletrap fleabag, tatterdemalion, jalopy, squalid, dilapidated, down at the heel. Vintage words It was kind of dilapidated But it still ran fine It wasn’t a total rattletrap No matter what people said. I would like to have a new car But I’m down at the heels right now having lost my job last month. I live in an aged fleabag flat In a squalid neighborhood Until I get back on my feet. Everyone calls me a tatterdemalion But I pay my own way. And when my old jalopy died A piece of me died too. I loved that little ‘0-two Jetta; I’d get in and it would go The best art of it all was this- It always brought me home again. I couldn’t face the breaker’s yard And see her all torn down for parts. I donated her to charity To help pay for someone’s brand new heart. ljm
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Jul 2, 2021
Jul 2, 2021 at 8:01 AM UTC
THE SAGA OF MY LITTLE BLUE JETTA
Word challenge using the words Rattletrap fleabag, tatterdemalion, jalopy, squalid, dilapidated, down at the heel. Vintage words It was kind of dilapidated But it still ran fine It wasn’t a total rattletrap No matter what people said. I would like to have a new car But I’m down at the heels right now having lost my job last month. I live in an aged fleabag flat In a squalid neighborhood Until I get back on my feet. Everyone calls me a tatterdemalion But I pay my own way. And when my old jalopy died A piece of me died too. I loved that little ‘0-two Jetta; I’d get in and it would go The best art of it all was this- It always brought me home again. I couldn’t face the breaker’s yard And see her all torn down for parts. I donated her to charity To help pay for someone’s brand new heart. ljm
I loved that '02 Jetta. It only had 85,000 mi on it. but the computer basket developed a glitch no one here could fix and the nearest VDub dealer is 100 mi away. I got talked into a Camry which I hate and won't drive. Hubby is now my chauffeur.
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Jul 2, 2021
Jul 2, 2021 at 8:01 AM UTC
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